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Twilight and Pinkie have been together for a little under a year, and they're celebrating their first Hearth's Warming as a couple by spending it with the rest of their friends. Twilight is determined to show Pinkie how much she cares for her with her present, and hopes that Pinkie will do the same.
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Only if you know how she felt Pinkie
This is awesome....this story is just so beautiful. I even have this warm feeling inside. Thank you for writing it.
Awesome
You made me cry, dammit!
Why are you such a good writer?
This was something else. cute yeah but if i was twilight i would have "a rock? a rock!? after i spent my hard earned bits on buying you that book the only thing YOU CAN GET ME IS A FREAKIN ROCK!?" heh heh nah just kidding even if making pinkie suffer is what i do even though i love her to death.
I wouldn't do that for a heartwarming moment like that and i hope to see more heartwarming stuff from you.
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"I got a rock."
(Hey, somebody had to say it.
)
You... Are incredibly good at this.
~Skeeter The Lurker
*Grins* very nicely done. this i truly perfectly Twilight, racing head and thinking she knows exactly what's happened, only to be caught short when the truth comes out.
Nice save, Pinkie... Nice save.
You made a rock romantic.....that is so amazing!
I love this story! The fact that the whole gang was there really added to the emotion and I immensely enjoyed the snippets of the other characters' relationships and their dialogue was perfect. I liked the idea of Twilight doing so much for Pinkie, and I also liked their nicknames. I laughed when Twilight made a comeback of "Balloonbutt," and I half expected Pinkie to accuse her of calling her fat.
As far as the ending goes, eh... it left a little more to be desired. At least, to me. The story was very cute and the build-up was amazing, but I wasn't satisfied with how it ended. I feel like one of the others would've been questioning Pinkie (most likely Rainbow Dash or Rarity), and I sort of wish there was more of a conclusion and some more of an explanation on Pinkie's part.
Great story, though. TwiPie is my OTP so this is going into my favorites. Thanks for writing it!
Oh my god a giant rock!!
This fic has a pretty undeniable pony-supremacy subtext. I'd wager Twilight receives a message the next morning telling her of Spike's suicide, since all of his friends have made it pretty clear, if indirectly, that they don't want him around anymore. Contrary to what Blue Dragon says, he is part of the group. If he's not with the only close friends the show has allowed him, then where the hell is he getting any affection, support, or companionship? Twilight knows damn well he's an outsider.
Well there's a nice slap in the face to Spike, Cadance, and her blood relatives.
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I'm gonna quote a response someone typed to you on another fic as a response to
They are his best friends but he isn't one of their best friends. Spike, as a little brother, isn't going to be present at everything that his sister does with or without her friends. Canon-wise, he gets left out of thing quite a lot.
Who's to say Spike didn't pick up a nice dragon on the side and is now having dinner at her place?
Honestly, there's asking why Spike isn't in a fic and there's being a dick about it. Guess which option you've followed. (hint: it's not option one)
3328676 True, sort of. Pretty sure I wasn't "being a dick" here, though (that sounds like it was from a while ago). Just a little darker than normal.
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Okay, I've read this comment over and over again and now I'm wondering, what do you mean? If you mean feelings, obviously they know that they love eachother.
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I mean only if Pinkie knew how hurt Twilight were because of the present she gave her.
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Well, after Pinkie explained why she gave Twilight that specific rock, she was glad.
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whoops sorry
How I didn't see through that
3328275 Dude, whatever you're on, I don't want any of it. You're either an obvious troll, or...
Yeah, ok, you're an obvious troll.
3347454 No, just tired of seeing Spike's only friends depicted as an exclusive group that doesn't include him. But I can see where you're coming from, so let me rephrase my original issue.
*ahem*
I think "the ponies who mattered the most to her in the entire world" is a bit too high of a title to give her pony friends, when measured against her family, who have all given more of themselves to make her happy than any of her fellow Element Bearers ever have, and probably ever will. So how do you imagien the rest of Twilight's loved ones are celebrating Hearth's Warming?
3349286 Fair enough, but still, you can't expect writers to include all of those extra characters. That really is an awful lot of characters when you start adding in Twilight's family, Spike, and at times, the Princesses.
*shrugs* It doesn't help that this is a romance story, and that it's mostly focused on Twilight and Pinkie Pie, to the point that all the other characters are more of a fluffy filler than anything else.
Sparklebutt alone made me like it, and Pinkie's present and the meaning of it made it a fave-worthy
(Usually I desire a lot more from fan-fics to favorite them, but if it's TwiPie I can't resist!)
PLOT TWIST! She actually found some random rock and made up the story to save money for LSD!
Daww that was adorable!
I did a reading of your fic. Youtube Reading
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Thank you! It was great