A guy that really loves futa. The dickgirl really ties the whole room together.
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I must say, I really enjoyed this
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Thanks
*silence*
Eeeeeeeewwwwwwwww.
This was gross.
But I liked it, though.
I'm just kidding. I only read the description. But I'm gonna read this later.=3
~theviciouskiller
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Thank you. I'm glad you were able to enjoy it. As for the speedy ending, the CMC have the stamina of probably a pony or two. Sex really takes it out of you, if you know what I mean.
I was only aware of 487 fetishes.
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Each of the CMC and their various pairings count as a fetish as well.
Why? Because I need more fetishes.
This is actually really, really good. I don't really make Spike gay or have him be the bottom, but this was still really awesome.
Though I do have to ask one thing. Why was there a secret door that had Big Mac's picture and the potion? Is it a tie in to another story or something? Or something else? Because it's mentioned Big Mac "looked like a girl" in a dress and I can't help but feel Big Mac has something to do with this potion. Little help please.
Overall still, great story.
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Thank you very, very much! I'm quite glad that you were able to enjoy it.
It's a bit of a teaser to one of my next stories that will coincide with "Taking a Load Off". In the new fic, Big Mac actually turns into a mare and AJ (and possibly some other ponies ) have their way with her.
The reference isn't very obvious, mostly because I haven't announced the next fic yet (I'm still working on the details), but I'm trying to subtly imply that AJ and Big Mac have been having R63/Futa sex in secret. Those naughty apples.
Thank you again, it really means a lot to me!
3331294 You're very welcome. I actually thought that since Big Mac was in a dress made by Rarity, it implied that Big Mac turned into a mare with the potion and Rarity turned into a stallion and had sex. But I like the Rule 63 AJ X Big Mac more. Sounds better to me.
Brb I gotta handle something after this little read.
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Or AJ persuaded him to wear it.
But yes, I'm a much bigger R63 Mac X AJ fan. I feel like he would go to his sister first whenever something like this would happen.
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I assume that means you liked it
It's always nice to take a step back from stories with intricate plots and side stories and just relax with a good clopfic.
Poor Spike, I almost never see him on top... although I don't think he minds.
But I do have to say, I'm really not a big fan of fetish #347. I don't know just something about it just doesn't sit well with me.
Other than that I liked it, I'm going to have to see what some of your other stories are like.
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Thank you! I'm happy you consider it good.
From what I've seen in most of the Spike groups I found, the majority have him fucking some mare (mostly the mane6). Which is part of the reason why I didn't submit it to any Spike groups yet (I'd like to but I'm not sure if it would fit in there).
Really? I thought #57 was more risque than #347, but to each their own.
Mostly clop with a small amount of plot. I'm told that it's extremely descriptive, fappable clop, but ymmv.
3331370 Oh indeed I did.
oh boy all my favorites!
Okay, futa CMC are definitely hot!
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Yes they are!
Well I think that's enough Internet for today. ( dude it's 4am) your right *continues reading*
Whoop! More cum inflation!
This is my face when I was reading this.
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Betrayal
spikes hole life has been to be fucked up the ass... poor guyguy
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3331449 Just wanna say, I love your name! 3331588 I am also gonna have to agree with you there. I feel horrible to admit it, but sadly it is very much so. That doesn't make me a pedo. . . . . does it?
Oh my gosh. This story's gonna be amazing. I haven't read yet, but I just know it. Spike with a bunch of futa fuckery? That's the kinda story I would write!
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...I'm gonna have to riff this now.
You did it again!
This was awesome and i realy enjoyed it!
I don´t understand all the dislikes, i think ppl are just to lazy to read the description
Hey, I noticed something.
>Inb4 Skeeter
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Just imagine they were adults. Should still be as hot :)
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Well then.
what did i just read?
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Pedo is literally child from the greek so anyone under 16 is in fact a pedo.
As to wether or not you have a particular paraphilia. Well if you have to ask... then no you don't.
Uh... wat?
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I think the majority of them are just downvoting based on the description, they're not even reading the fic.
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Wat. I don't get it.
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Whatever do you mean?
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You were warned what the subject matter was about. Why are you so surprised?
The title brought me here. The only problem I have with this is that Spike was the bottom. Besides that; this was good smut, not my cup of tea but good nevertheless.
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Thanks for the feedback!
3332834 I just expected something a little....... different about how it panned out. I'm not entirely sure why I read this to begin with.
Idea: A sequel with SB preggs with Scoot's foal?
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Well I'm not sure what you were expecting then. I mean it is a clopfic and obviously there will be sex. From the title it's pretty much implied that a foursome will happen. I interpreted your comment as: "I read this clopfic, I wasn't expecting sex."
Not trying to be harsh (or mean or degrading), just trying to understand the logic here.
To be honest, I don't think it was written badly, but quite the opposite! I am biased, but I'm told that this is rather descriptive, the story flows decently, characters are not completely broken, good usage of grammar and punctuation, and the word choice is not just the same word a million times.
I think the majority of downvotes and "disappointment" (I say it like this because I can't tell if people are disappointed or not) are because people don't like foalcon, or they wanted Spike to be on top or something.
That said, I'd like to know what people were thinking otherwise, because it not only improves the writer's abilities but it also leads to an overall healthy community.
/end mini-rant
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Perhaps.....
3333061 fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/284/7/f/reac_wuv_by_discordia_rose-d6q2bvd.png *squee*
3332834 A riff is taking someone's story and adding your own comments to it. Check my user page if you want to read one of my previous ones to get an idea.
I'm a sucker for futa. You've found my weakness!