Chapter 4: The Royal Meeting
Task Force Washington is now steaming north in steady speed. Princess Celestia asked so much about Queen Blackhood, with Twilight doing the same with Dimmed Star.
"How long you and Blackhood get to know each other?" Twilight asked.
"As long as my memory served. I was actually a book worm, and studied magic under her care." Dimmed replied.
"You have the same hobby as me!" Twilight beamed with joy. Dimmed Star was surprised.
"Well, I hope you don't have any conflicts with your teacher. I have conflicts with my teacher once."
"Well, same for me. It's just a shame a personal student of a princess be turned down."
"I could imagine that." Dimmed replied with a chuckle.
"Well, Blackhood, I think your student is socializing with my student." Celestia said with a smile.
Blackhood only smiled, but deep within her, she is planning something evil.
"Well, then, uhm......Why did you kill your own sister?"
Blackhood think about it, why? She thinks about it before answering.
"I was driven for power. Corruption-" But before Blackhood could spoke her sentence, Twilight has screamed in horror as Dimmed Star put her own horn into hers a while ago. Evil images of her and her friends being corrupted, destroying everything in their path.
"It....It will happen to us?!" Twilight exclaimed in horror.
"I'm afraid so. It's an age-old legend, kept by us, the Equinoxeans, for years."
But before Twilight could answer, a strange-looking pony, which resembles Rarity, just showed up and reported that the Captain needs them, in the bridge.
"Very well, Stone. You may lead the way." Blackhood said.
"As you wish." Stone replied.
Stone, a personal friend of Dimmed Star, escorted them to the bridge, in which the captain and the other ponies are waiting.
"Have a seat."
"Why thank you."
"Now, in a form of national sense, why did you joined the GPLF?"
"None of your buisness ape!" Rottenbunch said.
"I'm just asking the only basics."
"She says no, so no." Blackhood said.
"Ok."
"Sir!"
"What is it Lt.?"
"City due northeast in 550. Snowy storms have been looked upon, and heading towards us."
"Damn it...Alert the Admiral, I don't like the feeling I'm having right now."
"And what is that feeling captain?" Twilight asked.
"A feeling of doom."
The ponies shook their heads, dismissing the captains very words. But, Dimmed Star, knowing about the very words of the captain, nod in silence.
*At the USS George Washington*
"Admiral, John gave us a weather warning about a storm ahead. Snow storm to be precise."
"Get the men alert! I don't like getting frozen to death."
"Aye sir!"
The Lt. alerted the crew about the snowy weather, which was quiet chilling for them. The storm rages it's snowy fury upon the fleet, with sailors trying to keep themselves warm.
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3274056
Let me know what you want to do
allow me to point out by the time the war on terror began the Iowas were retired
also the Washington's battlegroup is as follows
Carrier: USS George Washington (Nimitz Class)
Air Wing: Carrier Air Wing 5 (CVW-5)
Cruisers (Ticonderoga Class)
USS Antietam
USS Shiloh
Destroyers (DESRON 15)
USS John S McCain
USS Curtis Weber
USS Fitzgerald
USS Lassen
USS McCampbell
USS Mustin
USS Stetham
From what I've read you've got a solid concept but the execution is poorly done with little care given to details. If you're interested I can rewrite it
3279000 Thank you for your suggestions.
3279114 I will rewrite the story if I have the time.
I would like to announce to everyone a very re-work for the story. The following should be:
1.) The ships in the fleet(a special thanks to dragonfang33)
2.) Rework on the storyline(a few quick hunches, again special thanks to myhe01)
3.) Adding a few more detail, and the date it occur. :)
I would put it on Hiatus status, to give time for me to 'refurbish everything'.
Thank you!
3284512 Thank you. Well, the refurbishment process is on-going for the story. I will like the suggestion you made for the story....:)
3279000
The Raptors are Air Force only.
3279114
Do they still have the F-14Ds? I know most of the Tomcat fleet was retired, but I wasn't sure about the Super Tomcats.
3279114 The F-35C is the CATOBAR version of the F-35. I was thinking this is in the near future, like maybe 3-4 years in. IF not, then let's just use some F/A-18E Super Hornets instead.
3287133 I know they are.
3280357 No problem.
3287133
Tomcats were retired
the main aircraft until the F35 is put into service is the F/A18 Hornet/Super Hornet
News:
Refurbishment done for chapters 1-3. Chapter 4 is new, but I refurbished it as well. It's short, but I will work it out to become a full-grown chapter. :D
If you have anything to say about the refurbishment process, pls tell me so I could tweek it up a bit.