Recovering from the Feather Flu, Blossomforth and Thunderlane regret being unable to participate in Tornado Day. As they watch the distant city of Cloudsdale work tirelessly with its new water, the two of them reminisce about their younger days, and wonder why the two of them had drifted so far apart.
Now with a prequel
And a sequel
Awwww... this is so cute!
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Blossomforth needs her own Character Tag. She makes a good ship with Thunderlane.
3268703 I agree, while I like Cloudchaser and Flitter, they don't seem to share the same kind of... I don't know... genuine nature(?) as Blossomforth
Even though the both of them at least had dialogue, poor Bloss
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3268723 HE'S GOT THE FEATHER FLU
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This was a very sweet little story. There were some errors with dialogue punctuation and capitalization, along with one other slight error I caught.
Should be "her Clousdale days".
But anyway, you did a pretty good job with this one. Have a fave and an upvote!
3268910 DAMMIT I THOUGHT I HID IT
Fun Fact: The roles of Blossomforth and Thunderlane were actually swapped from when I first wrote it
EDIT: I feex
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I found it!
LOL, no prob.
3268703 So does Scootaloo for Rumble^^ Sadly those two havent even been seen interacting in the show..... yet^^
The damocles approves. have a Spike and keep doing cute things:
SO CUTE!
Ok, One Second EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! This is very, very adorable! You did a Utterly MARVELLOUS job ! It was well pacing and I enjoyed the writing! good fanfic good sir!
3273419 Oh no, you're commenting on MY stories now
IT BEGINS
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The great comment battle! Let it begin!
I hope you don't mind, but I liked this fic so much I have put together an audio version on YouTube.
3287945 I think I'm in love...
Please, Please let me sub you
Great story :D, really liked it.
great story!!
That was a heartwarming story! LOVED IT
This is really excellent all around. This fandom is what taught me to appreciate shipping, and stories like this remind me of why I started liking it in the first place. The narration is solid, the dialog is natural, and situation is... adorable, honestly.
I now have a new appreciation for two particular pegasi. Great work.
Dawwwwwww so cute
I'm gonna have to give this one a solid D.
For D'awwwwwww! It is always nice to take a few background ponies and make something sweet out of it. I gotta say, I like your head canon for these two better then any others I have seen. So, allow me to give you a little 'Thank You' for the awesome read.
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Wear it with pride;
-Lumino
3423348 HUZZAH! NOW I JUST NEED IT FOR NEVER FORGET AND THE TRILOGY WILL BE COMPLETE!
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-Lumino
This was a very short and very sweet little story.
The set up for it was simple, but it didn't need to be anything more. It was just a sweet little story between two characters who wanted to connect with a long lost friend and I loved it. I liked their history together. I liked the fact that the romance didn't feel forced. That it felt natural. A lot of fics don't do that, but I felt you pulled that off very well.
Again, it's a very simple story. But this is a less is more situation. You don't need a lot to get your point across and I thought it was done very well. The descriptions were very well done. The romance didn't seemed forced. And overall, it was just a fun short little fic.
I'm glad I read it and I hope to see more from you in the future. Take care.
listened to scribbler's reading of this and i must say, this was a good fic.
i won't say great, but that's only because i listened to her reading of overture before i did this one and, well, i prefer the shiping of thuntavia to this ship. still for octi/vynil, but still
Lovely story
Cute couple too
This was a very cute story, I loved every moment of it, and it is something I could imagine happening in the show.
I want you to know that Blossomforth has her own tag now!
It can be found below here:
https://www.fimfiction.net/tag/blossomforth
Now with the story...
It was really sweet! And so filled with "awwwwwwww"!
I can't wait to check out your other stories that features this couple.