• Published 1st Oct 2013
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A Moment of Peace - Templar22



Humans. They came from the sky and made war, they are heartless killers. Untill a wounded Captian Armor meets one in it's final moments.

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Tired

Captain Shining Armor staggered into the deserted house. His head still rang from the incendiary blast that had claimed the majority of his squad. He struggled to get out of his smoking armor as he blundered through more than one door. Images of his burning soldiers flashed through his mind.

Damn humans, and damn this war.

The humans had first made planet fall a little less than a month before. They came from the sky like a never ending rain, leaving only destruction and devastation in their wake. Their weapons of mass destruction had found the Royal Guard woefully unprepared and hilariously outmatched.
The remnants of the equestrian armed forces had hatched a desperate plan. Retake Canterlot, reclaim the elements, and use their power to drive the aliens back. After a week of desperate fighting street by street, the battle was starting to turn in favor of Equestria. Things were finally beginning to look up. That was until a well place incendiary round consumed Armor’s team in hellfire.

He crashed into what might have once been a modest kitchen, but now lay in ruin. The fridge was knocked over on it’s side, the area surrounding the stove blackened by fire, and there several bodies. Two equines lay dead, one in guard armor and one civilian. Leaning against a blood smeared wall, was one of the accursed humans. Shell casings strewn about him, along with his head piece, a canteen, and a weapon. The human looked dead, his face pale, and blood all around him. One hand was held in a fist over his chest, while the other lay limply at his side.

Thinking himself safe, Shining Armor began to shrug off his still burning harness. His steaming spaulders clattered to the floor, as he began fighting with the straps of his helm. He then heard a noise that made his blood run cold. Over the sound of his helmet clattering down was the now all too familiar sound of a human weapon being readied with a loud click

Shining Armor found himself staring down the barrel of a gun held by one of the humans that appeared to be far less dead than he had thought. Shining shut his eyes and tried to fill his mind with images of his wife and foal as he waited for the small explosion that would end him..

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And he waited.

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And waited.

….

He opened his eyes and took a better look at the alien. It was the first time he had seen one without it’s combat mask. He knew what to expect from the scientific reports taken from cadavers, but seeing that flat face up close was something else. The most striking thing was the soldier’s eyes. Shining saw in those blue eyes the same fear he had seen in countless equestrians.

The soldier startled him when he spoke. Or at least, Shining assumed he was speaking. His language was harsh and discordant sounding to the equestrian. The soldier spoke again, louder this time. Again, Shining didn’t understand a word of it.

The soldier seemed to realize this and he began making a series of hand gestures. He pointed to himself, then to his gun, and shook his head vigorously. He then held up his free hand, fingers open, before pointing at the wounded Shining and shaking his head again. This was followed by him touching his own forehead and feigning a horn. He repeated this several times.

It’s meaning was obvious to Shining Armor. Use magic, and he’d be shot. Though in his current state he doubted he could do much in the way of offensive magic. He realized the human was waiting for some kind of response, so he nodded his head slowly.

The human seemed relieved, but didn’t relax. Nor did he lower his weapon. A faint sizzling could be heard as Shining suddenly realized that his helmet was still burning. With a small grunt of pain, Shining heaved the offending article away from him. But he could still hear something burning. Then the human shouted something and wildly gestured at his neck.

Shining threw himself to the ground rolling over and over as he tried to extinguish the flame burning it’s way through his protective enchantments. The pain was intense. He gritted his teeth as whatever substance was in that grenade refused to be smothered.

The human tried to stand but with a small cry slid back against the wall. He was still shouting something at Shining as he dropped his gun and reached around the back of his belt. He threw a small canteen in Shining’s direction, still shouting at him.

Shining Armor didn’t question it. He grabbed the canteen with his magic and emptied it’s contents over the flames. The half empty canteen’s bluish fluid immediately extinguished the flames and even deadened the pain. Shining nodded his thanks with a small smile to the human who was now staring at him, pistol again raised. More correctly he was staring at the canteen still floating in Shining’s purple magic.

Understanding dawned on Shining, and he dropped his magic. The human set his gun down again and spoke. It sounded like a question. Followed by what was undoubtedly a curse as he realized again that Shining couldn’t understand him. He gestured again at Shining’s horn then to the empty canteen. He reached for the canteen but seemed unable to get up to reach it. With an apologetic smile, he put his gun away again and made a sort of “go on” gesture with his hand.

Shining decided to humor him, and picked the canteen up with his magic and slowly levitated it over to the soldier. The human’s eyes lit up in wonder as he reached out for the floating canteen. A wide smile spreading across his face as he watched it turn slowly mid air. He muttered something under his breath as his fingers grasped it. He turned the canteen over in his hand, as if inspecting it. As he did so, Shining couldn’t help but notice the piece of glossy paper he held in one hand. The soldier said something unintelligible as he put replaced the canteen on his belt before noticing Shining staring at the small picture in his hand. He gave a small laugh before handing it to him, or more correctly handing it to his magic.

Shining pulled the blood smeared photograph closer to him. It was of two smaller humans a male and female. They both had large smiles on their faces as they reached up towards the camera. Shining looked from the photo to the soldier and back to the photo, the resemblance was unmistakable.

“Your children?” he asked, pointing with a hoof from the photo to the soldier.

The soldier thought for a moment before smiling and nodding his head slowly. He went to speak again, before pursing his lips. A thoughtful expression written on his face.

“Ye-us” he said proudly in terribly accented equestrian. He then pointed at Shining a question in his eyes. Shining withdrew his chest plate back and removed the small photo he kept tucked away. He sent it in the direction of the soldier. It was a certain pink alicorn holding a small blue bundle of joy. The soldier wiped his hands on his uniform before taking the picture. The soldier looked at the picture for a moment as he took a shuddering breath. Then he started shaking.

“Are you alright?” Shining knew the human didn’t understand him but the concern in his voice was evident. He took a painful step towards the human. The soldier’s hand snapped up, gun somehow in his hand. He looked up with tears in his eyes.

“You ah Shining Amah.” The gun came level to Shining’s head. “I um sorry. Is… duty.”

Shining stood up, teeth clenching as his burned foreleg bore weight. His horn glowed as he pulled his picture back to himself. He placed it back in under his chest piece, near to his heart.

The gun shook slightly.

“I never got your name.” The soldier was almost startled when Shining broke the silence. Seeing the human hadn’t understood, he pointed to himself “Shining Armor” then at the human.

“Markov.” He shook his head slowly, looking from his gun to Shining.

A soft pink once again lighted the room as Shining used his magic one more time. A small black and white photograph hovered mid air. Two smiling faces with hands outstretched towards the cameraman.

The gun clattered to the floor. The soldier took the picture in his now trembling hands.

“Is duty… kill. But am… tired.” He managed to say, with tears almost in his eyes.

“Well I’m tired too. I’m tired of the killing too.”

Markov silently nodded and leaned his head back against the wall, closing his eyes.

* * *

Captain Armor? Sarge! I think we found him!” Shining cracked his eyes open at the young pegasus guard in front of him. Who would’ve thought that he could’ve fallen asleep in the same room as a live human. The soldier extended a hoof to help him up and Shining took it gladly.

“What’s your name and rank soldier?”

“Spotter sir! Private 2nd class!” he replied in true military fashion throwing up a salute as he did so.

“At ease, how are things outside?”

“The elements were retrieved and used sir. We’ve got the humans on the run.”

Finally some good news.

Shining was about to ask for specifics when a unicorn spoke up from the other side of the room.

“Looks like you got one yourself sir!” He said excitedly as he prodded the still form of Markov.

“You will stop that at once soldier! That man requires medical attention.”

The suitably chastened unicorn checked Markov for a pulse.

“I’m sorry sir, this one’s long gone. Shall I search him? All he’s got in his hands is this little picture.”

Author's Note:

Written for One-shotober.
Was this in any way inspired by a certain scene from S&S Airborne Creed?
Whaaaaaat? Pffft, no... don't be ridiculous. I've never even heard of that awesome movie. (S&S 1 was better...)
As always, feel free to like, drop a comment, or/and check out my other stuff.

Comments ( 72 )

Hm. Neat.

I like stories that realize soldiers themselves aren't all just mindless goons and that the stresses of war are usually just as terrible for one side as it is the other. Good job.

its sad really but i love this

You messed up. The elements are useless against humans and we took over the world! Haha.

It's more fun if you imagine the role of Markov played by Tom Hanks.

I'd like to see an epilogue of this story cause it's really good. :heart:

Tom Hanks is best Hanks!

3286683>>3287056 I just needed a wounded human soldier and Mr. Hanks fit the bill...
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Forrest Gump is one of the greatest movies ever.

3286445 Have you seen Saints and Soldiers? I think you'd really enjoy it if you like stuff like this.

3286577 Well I had to some way for we Equestrians to fight off the invader scum.:twilightsmile:

3286572 Apparently I'm not so good at the whole "happiness" thing, and thanks for the comment.

3287363

Yeah if they weren't humans.

No matter what humans always win. That's why we are superior.

I saw Tom Hanks so i immediately clicked!

*Air Raid sirens where heard as a streak of smoke started to come into view before it started heading towards ponyville, when it struck ponyville there was a bright flash followed by a Earth shattering -BOOM-. When they were finally able to look, all Shining saw was a Mushroom cloud rising from ponyville.*
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3288192 I write dark not grimdark. There's a difference. Nuking dozens-hundred of innocents isn't really my thing... unless it's 40k.

3287755 That wasn't the intention, but I guess it worked anyways:twilightsheepish:

What nation was invading? Or was it a unified global effort. Markov is a Russian name, however, he could just be an immigrant to another nation. Regardless, what purpose would we have for invading Equestria, resources, maybe land? Anyway, wouldn't the UN at least send delegates if we had somehow made contact with an alien race? Believe or not, a division of the UN is actually dedicated to finding appropriate courses of action if we come into contact with extra-terrestrials. Because from Shining's description we just came and started fucking stuff up for no good reason. That... just does not make any sense. In no way does this scenario sit well with me. Anyway, if we know that we are in possession of high yield enemy ordinance, you would not keep it stored out in the open, and right on their fucking doorstep! That is stupid! You would have it transported back home so it could be properly secured. And how the hell did the ponies get them back! Shining said they were on the run! Just... I don't even-... I just... ♩One of these things is not like the other!♩


...anyway I loved the story good job the end...

3289671 To put it in perspective it might simply be an effort to "proactively protect ourselves.". More simply we found Equestria and got panicky. Someone high up decided the equestrians had to go and thus off we went. Its not nearly as far fetched as it sounds. Or worse..we're running from something and lose ourselves to the fear. Kill all in our path so that what is behind won't find use them against us.

Also, whats to say Shiny is in the know? Its not as clear cut even to him. It might have seemed like we just dropped from the sky raining death and pain. But he might not know of our meeting with Princess Celestia and our eventual turn on the fact we just met a GOD!

3289671 I intentionally didn't name any countries, I figured by the time we are able to make war on other planets, we'd have unified as a species. Similar to the C.O.G or the Imperium. Markov was just a name that I thought would sound better than say "Tom". I wanted it to be foreign sounding, and Rarity called her rock Tom so perhaps English names are not unheard of in Equestria. Also, how would we simple minded humans know the elements were anything other than fancy looking crowns? With a determined force, all things are possible. We could've gotten the elements back...
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OK, so maybe I fudged it.... just a little at the end

3289915

Or worse..we're running from something and lose ourselves to the fear. Kill all in our path so that what is behind won't find use them against us.

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Mind if I borrow that some time?

You do realize that even though you desired this to be a one-shot, it's good enough to where people are going to bug you to continue this, whether as a series or with a (number of) sequel(s).
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3290715

we simple minded humans...

...please tell me that was a joke...

3291372 Haha, yeah it's a joke. But I hope you saw the point I was trying to make.

3291271 Yeah, it's gotten tons of faves (even after I marked it complete) and I've just been sitting here scratching my head going "well shoot". I suppose at some point I might write a sequel, or add more to it, but like I said, this was written for One-Shotober.

3289915 Celestia isn't a god. Here is the official definition of the word god: the creator and ruler of the universe and source of all moral authority; the supreme being. Since when has Celestia been creator of the universe? As far as we know, nobody even knew of her until after the events of Hearth's Warming Eve. Now, it could be argued that this other definition falls into play with Celestia: a superhuman(or pony in this case) being or spirit worshiped as having power over nature or human (pony) fortunes; a deity. Well, all ponies have some degree of control over nature, so that's a no. And I do not think Celestia is in total control over all the fates of every pony in Equestira. Now, she may be worshiped, but this has not been made clear. However, this in itself does not grant her the status of a god.

3291421 How would you react to a magical talking horse that can will the sun in and out of her sky? I'm not calling her a God just a god. She is damn near godlike in her own right. I was simply putting forth that we would flip out shit if we stumbled over Equestria and all it takes is someone high up ordering it and we'd be at full war with them.

3291389 Yeah, but you would think artifacts stored in an highly secured vault in the nations capital would raise some suspicion. Especially after they notice that there was nothing else being protected, just the Elements.

3291434 .... uhmm... The vault isn't exactly super obvious... perhaps we missed it totally.
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:facehoof: yeah that sounded a little weak even as I typed it

3291426 I see where you are coming from, but I wouldn't even call her a god, more likely a demigod. And would the civilized world really just start attacking an enemy we don't fully understand. Especially if they haven't even shown any signs of aggression. I'm telling you that this is not how things would go down.

3291443 Yea, not obvious? Apparently a giant ass building that has an exclusive elevated road that goes directly towards it form the palace isn't obvious!:ajbemused:

But yea, enough bickering. I loved the story for what you wanted it to be, and that is that. Goodbye.

-Robert out.

3291452 Oh I fully agree but for the sake of argument I'm putting for what I believe is a fairly logical explanation. We wouldn't attack them on sight but we have no idea on the other factors, a dieing Earth, a totalitarian regime, or any other such things could lead to this. I just put forth the stupid panicked presidente idea because it's simple and fairly believable. Also we still attack things we don't understand based on a small sampling. Perhaps another equine race and us threw down earlier on and we simply assumed the equistrians were an off-shoot or the same race? Hell maybe a splinter group attacked us for being so damn strange first!

Some listening music for this.

Nice story, would like to see it expanded. And as a future historian I would like to know how this war started ... all thou it seem as the war started because of the policy described by George Carlin, the so call Big Dick foreign Policy.

3294648 ... well crap, now you got me all inspired for a prequel or something...

3295082 Perhaps after October...

I'm hoping the Equestrians attacked first because humans trying to conquer ponies always leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

3295348 Better grab some mouthwash then... sorry.

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It's not really that I'm against it, I'd just like to know why.

3295707 I'll explain that when/if I continue the story. I assure you it'll be something stronger than, "humans are expansionist monsters" or "the Equestrians are unknowingly sitting on piles of unobtanium rare exspenzive mineral X" or some other BS.

3296186
Thanks, I'm glad to hear that. I have a strong dislike for stories where humans are just attacking for selfish, unrealistic reasons. I'm watching the story in case you do update. :pinkiehappy:

3296186 I'd say leave the story a one shot it just seems good the way it is. ya know.

Comment posted by 454CASULL23 deleted Oct 4th, 2013

3296421 This particular story will probably stay a one-shot but I think I will write more, perhaps a separate fic/pre-quell/different perspective.

3296231 I'd suggest following. cause I'm awesome Because when I do more with this idea, it'll probably be a separate story.

I'm pretty sure this was based off a movie...

3291452 These two guys I know, Merriam and Webster, don't completely agree with you. http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/god You seem to be selecting one definition to the point of excluding the others. According to a classical understanding of what a deity is, Princess Celestia actually fits the classification quite well. However, the title is disquieting, and I think the character would shun it. If I were to end up an immortal alicorn with a talent such that I had dominion over something as important as day, night, magic, or love, I would strongly discourage worshipful behaviours of me, too. Maybe I'd figure out a Rebuke Prayer spell or something...?
:trollestia: "I really much prefer letters."

3291421 You know what? You're right. This whole thing is extremely weird and really nauseating, and not just because of the violence. That being said, there are a ton of fics that take this same configuration very seriously, and they aren't one-shots. This one is special in that it takes that weird space-empire monstrous humanity and shoves a heart into it. In this way, it could be read as a critique of those fics. That's probably why a lot of people are liked this, if I were to hazard a guess.

3287389 Unless the Doctor isn't there. Then we're boned. And when poorly behaved humans go against the Doctor, he wins. So, really, what you're saying is that the Doctor is superior. Really, I think what makes the Time Lords so great is that they are a race of dreamers, philosophers and builders, who have explored all of space and time. Sure, they have their bad moments, but ultimately most of them choose good. That's what makes them so great, not their unmatched martial prowess. Time Lords Aren't Bastards.

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