Escape from Madness

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A brother and sister flee their homeland. Desperate to escape the Madness, they run to neighboring Equestria. Where they hope to ride out the storm in peaceful Ponyville.

It's a shame their past will stop at nothing to find them again.
Editing by Phlamingsoul
Cover art by butterkeet

Chapters (4)

CH1: Nature Walk · 29th Jul 2013 · 1,217 words
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CH2: Getting Answers · 4th Aug 2013 · 1,151 words
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CH3: Switching Trains · 19th Aug 2013 · 2,121 words
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CH4: Train Ride · 12th Sep 2013 · 2,425 words
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PinkLemonLimeSprinkles

PinkLemonLimeSprinkles #1 · Jul 29th, 2013 · · · CH1: Nature Walk ·

First comment, yea! I like it!

Dead To Frostbite

Dead To Frostbite #2 · Jul 29th, 2013 · · · CH1: Nature Walk ·

You should have added a bit more background - it's hard to figure out what's going on, although I can guess what is. Other than that, it's nice - action's good, concept is interesting so far...

Templar22

Templar22 #3 · Jul 29th, 2013 · · · CH1: Nature Walk ·

2958405 double fist pump YES! SOMEPONY LIKES IT!

2958445 Backstory? All in good time my friend... all will be revealed. I did have a background filler prologue almost ready to go, when I realized how boring it was to read walls of text. It was like reading a history text book glad you enjoyed! There will be more action!