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flutterdashforever


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When something is taken, it leaves a space. This is basic physics, it’s how the world works; the bigger the object the bigger the space it leaves. When something is the foundation, the framework on which everything else is built, the whole structure will come crashing down, leaving nothing but rubble and dust. When something is taken from a pony, she must come to terms with what it is she has lost and what it is she has gained. Rainbow Dash must now find something new, a new foundation on which to build herself, a daunting task if faced alone. Can she resurrect her oldest friendship when she needs it the most?

So this is it; the story I wrote to celebrate my one year Fimfiction anniversary. Huge thanks to AppleDashFan123 for proof reading and generally giving great advice. I've put a lot of work into this and I hope you enjoy it. As you can see, the cover art is a little plain. If you know of any cover art I could use, check out the blog post I made about the subject. As always, if you notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, please let me know.

Rated teen for medium course language and sexual references.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

Interesting.... I think I'll follow along with this! :twilightsmile:

Well this chapter partially explains where the FlutterDash may fit in, even if Rainbow is only gay because of Twilight's magic. Hooray for Gay Magic!:pinkiehappy:

So far this isn't too bad, I look forward to seeing where the story will go. *crosses fingers* please let the story end in FlutterDash, but seriously even if it doesn't go that way I might still enjoy this story :twilightsmile:

3251670 Why thank you. :twilightsmile: If we get enough people following this, maybe we can start an epic conga line.

3253472 Welcome to the conga line. :pinkiesmile: Glad you're liking it.

HHHHMMMM, You can feel the aversion to homosexuality in the last few paragraphs! KEEP GOING OR I WILL COME FIND YOU!!!! just kidding....but seriously continue it.

No bad Twilight, no fucking around with ponies sexualities. Also

If you’re going to hate someone, hate Hasbro for wanting to sell a new toy line.

What are you doing breaking the 4th wall? You're Applejack not Pinkie.

A partly feel bad for saying "hooray for gay magic" in my last comment . Don't get me wrong, I'm all for homosexuality and it's rights but Rainbow suddenly turning gay against her will can be scary for her. A part of her changed and it wasn't something that is suppose to change. I won't go and say which situation is worse; turning gay or dealing with being gay but we know Fluttershy and Rainbow are each going through these scenarios and I have a feeling that the future chapters will have them helping each other.

Anyways just wanted to say that I like how you wrote Rainbow's reaction to her situation and how she poorly handles it. As always I hope for more good stuff :twilightsmile:

3253657 *hides* Don't worry, I'll finish it. *gulp* :twilightsheepish:

3259820 I saw the opportunity and I couldn't resist. :pinkiehappy:

3297331 Thank you. :pinkiesmile: I'm really glad I did that bit right, I was kinda worried about making it seem like she fell to pieces a little too much, but in the end, I figured that something like that happening against one's will would be really traumatic. It's good to hear someone agrees with me. I hope not to disappoint in future chapters. :twilightsmile:

This story is great....KEEP GOING!!!!!! :flutterrage:

Big mac and Cheerliee I can see. They have great moments together on the show as well as a good friendship as far as I can see.
Big Mac and Pinkie Pie I can see if it were Pinkie who led the way. I could even happily go with Big Mac and Soarin.
But Big Mac and Rainbow Dash...? Very strange... and the start put me off enough that i kinda skim read it a little

I'll keep going, but only because this is suposed to have Flutterdash.

WHAT IS UP WITH THAT ENDING?!?!?!?! :flutterrage:

Personal stuff comes first, bro, don't stress yourself out just to put out chapters. I know that I, for one, will wait patiently until the next chapter comes out.

3364910 Thanks for your understanding. I'm glad you're enjoying it enough to be patient for the next installment. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, it's turning out really well so far, I'm looking forward to reading more.

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