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Sleep Sonata

Twitter: @DandyEcho, twitch: Twitch.tv/Dandyecho writing is slow, math is hard. Isn't this world great?

Sleep Sonata Joined 27th Aug, 2013 · Offline

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I didn't know much of the world outside my hometown. Why would I? We in Trottsdam took care of each other. At Canterlot Magic Academy, I learned about more than just magic and lore. I pushed the boundaries of pony magic, and now I need to be responsible for it.
Chapters (13)
Complete Published: Sep 21st, 2013 Download
31,357 words
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The Plebeian
The Plebeian #1 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · · Fresh Start ·
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The title of this story is misspelled. Don't ask how I know.

You could really use a proofreader. There are a few little glitches throughout. As for the actual story, it looks like it could go somewhere interesting, but it's not exceptionally artistic at this point. You could work on adding a bit more expression in your prose. Make sure it doesn't all seem plain and literal.

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