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Memories are precious. A portal to the past where we can relive moments of joy, and learn from our mistakes. Now imagine they're gone. You've lost your home, your knowledge, yourself. This is what happened to Starry Night, who awoke in a cave with no recollection of who she was or how she got there. She needs to find a way to answer her questions, and reclaim her identity.
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I guess this is good.... but you could use some spacing between paragraphs. I didn't notice any spelling errors, soo good job!
This is looking great so far, cant wait to read more
So far, im loving the story
it's easy to read, not too complicated and the plot is interesting
there isn't really much to change, just some minor grammar stuff
I wish i could read the rest, but its too late 
fave
just a heads up, I'm only going to post two more chapters, then the story will be complete. I'll post them together. You'll see why.
I lied.
I'm holding back on the last chapter/epilogue until I can get a second opinion on whether or not it'll help or hurt the story. I anyone is interested in pre-reading it, hit me up 
and I'll send it your way.
It's been a late night, but I've finally had time to go back and edit this story properly. Read up!
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God Damnit, Eskerata
4646464 This is why I'm not a movie critic. Sorry about that.
Ponies shake hooves, not hands.
In fact, I think this story needs an editor to go over it with a comb. Other than the errors, however, it seems enjoyable enough.
Graar mistakes abound, but it's a good story
Or Starry could make her way around the city while the rest of the group goes through it to get supplies, and they meet on the other side.
What? Uh, NO!!! It's not his fault that he hates? That makes no sense at all!
Forgiveness does not absolve someone of the consequences of their actions. Crow broke the law, and as such reparations need to be made against him. Letting him off scott free is balogne.