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After saving her own dimension and be banished to other reality, Bloom turned into a unicorn and now must live a new life in the peaceful village of Ponyville. There, she will meet new friends, have a new home and a new job. She will meet also a new love, when she bumped into a big red stallion. Things will worse when Bloom see the possibility of return home and see her old friends, her family... and her former love. She will have to make a choice that will decide her whole life.
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Seeing as Winx Club is second only to MLP in my heart, it was such a pleasure to discover the first crossover of it that I've read on this site. While I understand the difficulty of writing in a second language, and I commend you for your effort, I would strongly recommend finding an editor, as such numerous grammatical errors detract from the story's overall value. As for the plot and premise, while it did have an emotional impact during Bloom's sacrifice, my main issue is that the conflict was rushed and underdeveloped. The Lord of Order came straight out of the blue, with little explanation or buildup. I'd recommend trying to flesh out some parts and add more details. Overall, I don't think I'll be following this story, but as one Winx fan to another, I wish you the best of luck in this endeavor.
Yay winx club bronies now have their first story
YAY I WANT MOAR
You only have to wait. I have other things to do and I still have to organize the ideas. When I can, I'll post more chapters.
3242743 what something originally
Why cherry blossom if to match the cutie mark why not flame heart or dragon heart or anything
3245622 Because cherries are reds, just like Bloom's hair, and her name is similar with "blossom". It has nothing to do with the cutie mark. The flame heart has to do with the power of the dragon flame that bloom had and gave her healing powers.
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Ok
I already have vectors for the winx club if you want one for your bloom I could make one for you
3257386 If you want, you can do it. just show me.
3242602 Pretty much what they said. But there are a lot of editor groups. Maybe you can hire one.
I'm so sorry about the mistaken in the chapter
. I forgot to translate a paragraph. I have been so busy that I forgot to check
. I already ask my sincerest apologies.
Get an editor. There are too many errors just in the story description ALONE.
i like please make more chapters
Have you seen the wink club because that sounds like a different show.
And than comes sky to equestria
I have a bad feeling about this you will pay applebloom.
3382365 I'm thinking put him in the sequel, where cherry blossom and big mac will marry. But, who knows...
3382365 Or perhpas the Rest of the Winx Club
Teleport big mac to the crystal empire obviously
Meanwhile, Diaspro is beside herself with joy and just waiting to start "Operation: Make Soulmate Forget Crazy Redhead."
When comes the sequel
This story blows sorry but it doesn't fit in winx club. The ending was not good I'm sorry if you looking for people with tragic life try Batman, Spider-Man, and Samus Arms that makes more sense. Try again pal start over sorry it's not working!
i love it and when will the sequel come out
I'm sorry about the changes in Blue Sword's character, but I needed to do it to better fit the description of the character I will do in my next project.
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me want sequal
The return of the trix haha haha
"He can't lie, but he can troll"
I'm Portuguese and I'm not used to write in English
-well, I was going to comment on the grammar and such, but now I feel bad doing it. However, this kind of thing is easily fixed with a few editors and some good proofreaders. However, I am also of the opinion that some of this felt kind of rushed, like you wanted to get to the crossover faster.
Although, for a story where 'main girl gets forced into the other world' type of story, I have to admit...its not horrible. Nice job on the beginning, you just nneed to improve
I made some changes to Blue's description in this story for that it matches with Twilight and Blue Sword, as I did previously, and I will do the same with the other chapters with Blue.
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Silly you, that's basically Diaspro's entire job.
Before I read this, I must know: If Apple Bloom becomes a Unicorn, then what species are Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo?