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Rakoon1


I'm a Portuguese author who wants to share his stories.

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This story is a sequel to The Light Kingdom


After a few months since the Light Kingdom had awakened from its stone sleep, the Lord of Chaos comes with a new plan to take over the world. This time, he want to use every single villain that had tried to conquer Equestria and other lands and their inhabitants. For that, he had to take the prison where they are: Tartarus, the most terrifying place that exist in all world. For that, he managed to steal Golden Paladin's key, the one thing that can give to its user the full control of the prison. In this story, we will have old and new villains that will try to shake our heroes life in order to accomplish their goals or their master's. It will be a battle for peace very difficult to win.

Note: This story is the sequel of The Light Kingdom. It must be noted that this alignment of stories doesn't follow the main alignment of the fourth season of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.

First story: The Life of a Young Colt
Second story: Twilight and Blue Sword
Third story: The Light Kingdom
Fifth story: Star Knight and the Nine-Tailed Fox
Sixth story: The Island of Tambelon
Seventh story: Light and Darkness - The Shadow of Midnight
Eighth story: The Hidden Prince
Nineth story: Aventures in the Bermikun Triangle
Tenth story: The Elements of Virtue
Eleventh story: The Prince of the Cursed Kingdom

Chapters (36)
Comments ( 16 )

This sounds like a sequel to something. Is it a sequel to something?

Is there anyplace in any of these stories that you explain why you seem to have replaced Discord's role in My Little Pony with a generic B villain who has a title rather than a name? Or does Discord exist as a separate character, and if so, why is the Lord of Chaos someone different?

I love the story already!!!! :heart: :twilightsmile:

So quick question is the snow queen a reference to Elsa from Frozon of is it just me. Also I have a feeling Golden paladin has some past with the snow queen :duck:

P.S love your story right now, so much nostalgia from the villains from books and movies.:scootangel:

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Ansewering your questions, yes, I inspire more or less in Elsa from Frozen. In fact, I inspire in Ingrid, Elsa's aunt in Once Upon a Time. About Golden Paladin, indeed he had some past, but is not with the Snow Queen. You'll now in my next chapters:twilightblush:.

Sorry for being late but wow, this story just turned dark in the final act. It is a good chapter and a great story together and for some reason I have a feeling the power of 'love' will save them.

Also is perfect Scale a reference to that one guy from Batman brave and the bold. You know the yin and yang guy who betrayed his masters and became a god. Just wondering?:twilightsheepish:

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SO. MUCH. MORE. NEEDS. TO. READ. THE. STORY. :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowderp: :raritydespair:

6608665 Ok you need to chill. I know it is very sad about what is happening but please just breathe in and out ok.

Anyway great chapter in this great story. You do your stories well but a few misspellings here and there but can forgive.

Have a feeling when Scale gets too much power, it will be too much for him.:trixieshiftleft:

Now you can vote for your favorite villain. I have a new poll for that where you can vote in at most three of your favorite villains. This is the link: http://www.poll-maker.com/poll478564x00574f07-19

Well I saw that one coming in were Scale defeats Golden but it was good chapter nonetheless.:scootangel:
Well let's see what Twilight will do to defeat Scale or maybe Star will save the day with a special power the kid has.:twilightblush:

Okay so this chapter and the last were really good and to be honest, I didn't see Heartbeat giving her light to Twilight. You really did good with the story on using vilions from books and movies and tv shows, so that is all I have to say. Hope to be here when it has a sequel and hope it comes soon.:pinkiehappy: (if there is one I Hope:twilightblush:)

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