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Loyal
Just a dude. Writes horsewords... with varying regularity.
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All at once?
Well, alright then!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Are they humanized?
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>Human tag
>Says so in the foreword
Cover image is confusing. I wish I could find something better >.<
Good call on the chapter split locations, working out great.
I must admit that I dislike most... almost all humanized fics a little bit, to me if you like mlp then why the dislike writing about ponies, its largely the same reason I can't stand the eq girls movie... aside from it being bad.
That being said I still try to read all your stories, why because human though they may be they are also so interesting and well written, and of such quality and uniqueness of content that can't help but enjoy them.
I'll say Good Job
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Humanized and HiE often share the tag, so it's a bit confusing. Tag "anthro" is what you need, imo.
And sorry for not reading the foreword (didn't look at the chapters at all)
I'm honored that a request I asked many moons ago has been the inspiration of such an amazing story and I'm glad that you, loyal, have written it. Love and friendship all around
Woah, all chapters at once...41k words of Octy x Rarity... Excuse me, I must mop up this drool, then read this story.
Small continuity error I believe. In the last chapter the driver expressed surprise when he found out that he was picking up Rarity and Octavia. In this chapter the receptionist says that the driver told her he was leaving to go pick Rarity and Octavia up from the train station. Either this is an error on the author's part, or an error on the characters' part, in which case they should get their story straight before someone gets wise to their scheme (whatever it may be). Now I'm going to be on the lookout for some crazy smuggling ring in the hotel staff...
(And the story is good so far.)
I love these music scenes. I can actually hear the music in my head as I read them.
After reading this, I have a real need for two plane tickets to Bora Bora, or some other secluded, tropical destination! You really know how to paint a picture for the mind.
I also give a huge THIS to the earlier comment on the music scenes. I'm an avid EDM fan, so the club scene felt like having BPM playing in my head as I read. I've never been a fan of 'classical' per se, but as usual, your description of Octavia's performances really make the music come to life in an awesome way.
Bravo on a job well done! i.imgur.com/mmjN8.png
Didn't the Titanic sink on its maiden voyage?
As much as I enjoyed Intimate Details, I have to admit I am relieved that this was over. It actually seemed perfect for it to conclude. Please don't take it the wrong way, but I was a little disappointed with part of the epilogue for the previous one. It just seemed too fast for my taste--almost like after the wedding and the "I Do" from two beautiful ladies, everything just went lightspeed, from Sweetie graduating Celestia's academy, to describing how Rarity is Octavia's exclusive seamstress, and everything is all right with the world.
This is why I was absolutely ecstatic when I found out by accident that you made a sequel (or spinoff) about their honeymoon, and for the most part, you did not skip or skim when it came to all that they happened during that resort stay. (Personally, I kinda wanted more from the "fun bag" scene that is basically implied, but what can I say, I'm a guy, can't help myself for being perverted.
)
That last couple of paragraphs in Rarity's thoughts was cute. It was the end, sure, but most importantly, it was a new beginning. To think that just a few months ago, she was loveless, literally a foot out the door for her business and home--only for her to be saved and rescued by her savior and now her wife, forever. It shows how much has changed from that first dress commission.
Again, thank you for such a wonderful story. I do hope there is more from Octavia and Rarity, but if this is the ultimate end, thank you for such an emotional and heart-warming ride.
DanvilleBengal out!!!!
WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF?!?!? 14+ CHAPTERS ALREADY?! JSBAJKBVAJVN A NZ NZNZDBVAJV DZNVMZDMBMXXMBMXFN NBXMNB VNSZKDB SJN MXM *dead*
All 42k words at once... Oh my, I'm gonna have a wonderful time trying to read all of this
Yes. Fucking YES!
3191439 I think what happened is the guy that drove the 2 to the hotel told a different guy who it was, and then that second guy told the lady at the counter
3193527 So as long as there's no ice involved 'Tavi should be A-OK
That was truly great Loyal. I think you accomplished everything you wanted too (at least that you stated) but I am curious. Just how much did you know about clothing/fashion before you went into this?
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Fucking.
Nothing.
3202571 well then I have to say you did a great job because I had to picture each outfit you wrote about through the entire story and thanks to your details I could. Cheers!
Finally got around to finishing this, and I loved every second of it.
On another note, I always found it baffling how this ship wasn't done very much. I mean, Rarity the Canterlot socialite, and Octavia the Canterlot cellist: they just seem to fit to me. This and a single anthro R34 picture I have saved on my computer are the only two things that come to mind in regards to this ship.
My only gripe with this story? It ended. But, after this point I understand it would be rather hard to come up with more drama—at least on the realistic side—so this is the perfect drawing of the curtains for this tale.
Brava.
Very good job, my good sir! All that I have come to expect and more! Now, I must ask, will you please take a look at my story and tell me what you think? I would be extremely grateful.
Wow, I only just finished this now, half because of an over-active social life, half because of dead computer, and I fucking loved it all. It was brilliant, and it was very, very hot, and I'm startled by just how depressingly underrated it is. I cannot wait to get round to your next fic, but I'm not sure if you've started another yet and I'm really bloody tired, so I'm gonna go and grab some sleep.
Once again, bravo good sir. This is a fanfic I will continue to re-read throughout my life.
I like the story.
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Affirmative, on its way to New York from Ireland.
Excellent through and through!
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I want that drink!
Daaawwwwwwwwww
............holy shit that was hot. I'm gonna go lie down now
[No words. Just nope. That collection above is the best you'll get]
[Good job]
I've tried to write this comment for at least 10 minutes now, and nothing I write comes close to capturing my feelings after reading these two stories. Thank you for writing this and thank you for making me feel again. You sir, deserve my highest praise--but I must warn you, I don't say this very often so it might come out a little weird:
You...are...a good person!
I did it!
Anyway, great job. Truly a great job; I feel honored to have had this story brought to my attention. I wish you many blessings
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I'll be in my bunk.
Seriously, there is no compliment about your writing I could possibly make that wouldn't be a cliche by now. I feel almost like a voyeur reading this!
3193527 Yes. Just ask Harms Way. And read his stories, as well as LightningSword's stories.
I think it will be best if we never find out what wwent on between chapters
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You aren't the only one buddy x'D
I want to see a picture of Octavia in that outfit soooooo badly. The descriptions for the setup of that scene we're so sensual I couldn't stop drooling. Very well done.