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why is this a one shot? this can have a good deal of chapters!! I already have a few ideas!!! please keep it going!
4943166 Actually, I was considering it. Either that or series of one shots.
Ohh! Yeah, I read waiting as wanting, stupid brain! No clop yet.
Rarity lost her ribbon.
I agree, a sequel would be fitting.
I was directed to this story by phenrys, and I've got to give you a standing ovation. Excellent job. Very hot and fun to read.
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4943646 thank you all I believe you are all in luck. As I have been hit by the ...oh fuck it. Yes I am gonna do more. Writing it was fun... for more than one reason...
Never seen this pair before. If you have more idea then go for it. The bit about mastering six martial arts was a bit silly though.
4946149 it would explain why she is as fit as she is since she reads most of the time. Also it tied everything together. I don't really need a reason...it's clop.
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Even clop needs a reason.
4947472 the reason was because Lightning wasnt paying attention. She wasn't thinking either. Also because funny. And Shining probably is over protective.
4955757 there may or may not be a sequel in the works... it may be a multi chapter fic... possibly involving dash...and others...
That was hot~!
4958302 thank you. I do try. And this is more popular than anything else I've done.
Told you it would turn out well!
4966491 yes, yes you did. And so Phenrys hath typed it so it shall be popular...porn.
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Eeyup, and don't you forget it!
well this was fun. totally wouldn't mind a sequel
needs a sequel this... maybe not with clop but hey up that's up to you
5026346 I am typing the sequel right now... Clop yes, but those chapters shall be labled, and maybe I'll write a non clop version of each chapter....
I enjoyed it but felt that at parts it seemed a little rushed but that is a minor detail all in all I really enjoyed it
5117799 Yeah, I felt like I was rushing it in couple spots right before Twi and lightning met, but I couldn't figure out how to write it better. Thankfully I haven't gotten that feeling yet in the sequel.
This is pretty good. the coupling is different too so it's nice and fresh. I didn't see a lot of plot or character development, but it's a one shot so that's fine. I had a lot of fun reading it! I can't wait to see future stories to get wet over! just like my own!
5246495 There is a sequel...