The reality we know is gone, only to be replaced by chaos. Three ponies show up out of the time vortex into this new world, are they the ones who can restore order or is something else, something ancient at play here.
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Exceedingly good read man, I can't wait for new chapters, work on the dialog a bit more and this is a 5/5!
263847 You're a 5/5!!!
Sounds really interesting! I love the epic-fantasy tone you've got going. I did notice two typos,though: "prolog" should be "prologue" and "melena" is "millennium" (singular) or "millennia" (plural)
Good job! I'll keep reading.
Fabric of reality.
Ugh, another bad pun. And yet oh-so fitting.
Sweetie Bell: "Dumb fabric!"
Needs a bit of work as far as punctuation goes, but otherwise is a good read.
Burn, baby. Burn!
Commence theme song and spinning TARDIS.
keep up the good work!
473016 will do
I have to wonder whether its actually Luna, or if it's the Nightmare, given that several writers depict them as being separate entities once the Elements were used on her.