Rarity has an untold history of her foalhood crush.
Page generated in 0.025 seconds
Total duration
764 users online
514,809 hits today, 2,020,241 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
The Sargeant Spaz I wrote was based off of this performance here.
4178106
4178100
Well this was embarrassing. I meant to publish a new chapter and it didn't follow through. Welp, ya got one now!
*sigh* Oh, dear. Here we go. I'm not gonna like the next chapter if it holds the rehearsal. I really won't.
*Sigh* You know, it was bad enough that Twilight's concerns were dismissed in the show, but here it's specifically known that the CHANGELINGS are the ones behind the threat, so Celestia blowing off Twilight's upcoming accusations against 'Cadance' (assuming this still sticks to canon now) is made even worse considering, A: she knows that there's an army of shape-shifters threatening war, and B: Chrysalis was specifically targeting Shining Armor. This just shifts things on Celestia's part to 'reasonably believable disbelief because Twilight was acting crazy' to 'totally stupid because she should have had a full red alert going off in her head given that she KNEW changelings were afoot'. (In case you were wondering, Shining gets a pass because mind control.)
4178196 I would normally skip that part, but if there's no rehearsal, then Twilight won't get sent to the caves, and if she doesn't get sent to the caves, then Cadance will rot there. But I can tell you this, you will like the chapter besides that one scene. I'm doing my best to make it palatable while sticking to the canon story line.
But at the same time, I would recommend if you can't stand that part, then skip ahead. But I guarantee you will miss out on a future event if you decide to skip the chapter altogether.
4178606 I never said I would skip it. I'll bear through it, provided there is something you're adding to make some sense of justification to the girls walking out on Twilight like that. At this point, I'm kinda hoping that Chrysalis put on a Suggestion spell on them, making it more believable they didn't believe Twilight. The author cannot make promises to his readers, but you've done a fairly good job with adapting the canon storyline so far with a few tiny snippets here and there, so whatever you got in store, must be good.
4178655 Can't say that there have been times I wanted to veer away from the canon. It's hard doing everything within the show, but I accepted that challenge. And plus I've made it this far, can't turn back now.
About fcking time
Now, finally, reunions and answers...Or maybe not since Shining is under a spell.
quickmeme.com/img/45/4515147cbd774c8af480405cbc8642d8f02d2a305cd1f2e73a3202675be1157f.jpg
I demand another chapter! Huzzah!
... Please?
EDIT: So wait, Azure is just back? Just like that?
... I'm okay with this if only because I like Azure. Carry on.
4195892 Azure was already back. Discord's spell was broken and thus he was returned to normal by the next chapter. I guess I could've made that a little clearer.
4196359
Ah! I see...
I still demand a new chapter...