Rarity has an untold history of her foalhood crush.
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Well this took longer than expected.
And the internal conflict for Shining grows. He loves Cadence but he can't stop the dreams, and now that he knows the dream girl is real. This will only confuse him more. Not to mention that he wants to avoid Rarity feeling its for the best. Prolonging the eventual discovery/reunion.
And we still got a few more chapters before that don't we?
I am curious do you plan on the reunion taking place at the wedding? after? or before? The wedding seems the most logical but on the other hand if she found out some time before. It would provide at different, but plausible, reason for Rarity fainting at the news of Shining's wedding.
Rarirty: I'm losing my prince. No! (faint)
Or maybe the reunion will go like this:
Rarity telling off Blueblood is even sweeter here than it was in the show.
My heart hurts so badly.
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Howcome?
4026290 Because of your story. I have ne'er cried so hard in all my life. At the part when the foal didn't survive. Never again, SillyAnon.
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Sorry. I assure you that there will be no more foals harmed in the making of this story. Instead, there will be one who you will hate with a passion (with some greusome, yet skippable details in the backstory). So be encouraged and keep reading. You'll be glad you did.
I just read the entire fic up to this point in 10 hours. I need more. Moar! MOOOAAARRR! !!!
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You sir picked a fine day to request another chapter. Enjoy the read.