Rarity has an untold history of her foalhood crush.
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Yeah. it looks like Shining finally blew a gasket.
Now you'll get to see more of his antics in this act as well as the antics of Rarity and her friends
"My our teacher" doesn't seem right, somehow
I was wondering how you would go about the time difference. I like it. Maybe some missed story opportunities but this is about Rarity and Shining.
Biggest surprise to me was that Rarity and Shining are having the same dream. Did somebody cast a spell? Are they actually sharing the dream together?
Poor shining being hunted by all the mares in estrus...dude never stood a chance...so when will luna come after him? Lol
Luna is going to have a fuckton of fun if she can see their dreams....imagine it at breakfeast
"So i see you mounted that little mare last night, shining"
Cadance: "WHO WAS THE BITCH WHO STOLE HIM?"
That reference to the dwarven king balin from LOTR made me laught my ass, a most excelent chapter.
Finger's crossed that five years away managed to mellow Celestia's nephew.
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And this is the reason you shouldn't type your stories out at 3 am. Corrected.
when did Rarity develop her crush on Blueblood? I'd kind of thought that somehow she would replace Shining Armor with him as her ideal Prince.
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You smart ass bastard. You figured it out!
It will be hard to remember someones appearance after 8 years of not seeing them. So maybe her visual descriptions would be a bit off.
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Lol sorry I just thought Rarity's BB fixation would have developed at some point before meeting Twilight. But I now realize that there can be alot of time between her coming to Ponyville and the events of Ticket Master. I'm a little disapointed at BB's poor showing as a villan. His gelding wasn't as sweet as I wanted since it happend off scene. I'm sure you have more planed for him so it had to be light or else youd have a whole ACT 1.5 but I wanted to see the whole fall of the former Prince of Magic, in all his messy crying like a foal, gnashing of teeth, glory. As aunty Celestia rips his ball off (with her teeth) and sends him off to Trottingham. He probably tried for Twily and Celestia went apeshit.
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P.S.
Now you know why Orion was nowhere to be seen during the course of the latter portion of the story.
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Dear past self... This was way more than 15 chapters, and WAY more than 100,000 words. Why did you even start this damn project?
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Oh you'll like how he'll be dealt with. Just don't expect it too soon.
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Ooo ok but if possible and if its interesting hearing the tale of how he got kicked out in the first place would be nice
3767120 It will be mentioned. Let's just say that he tried to pull a fast one.
Hooray! The story is going great! :D
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Nice to have you back. How was the basic training?
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Oh wow, someone who remembers Waldo!
Yeah, about that. I had a medical discharge. It sucks. But hey, I'm going back in 6 months for a second shot!
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On a note about the story, though, as I am oh so committed to this work, the story is going great I see. Took me about 5 hours to read chapters 11-26. Good to see you working hard, hehe
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So sorry to hear about the medical issue. Those kinds of circumstances usually do suck a plethora of wrinkly, cheese-odored, sweaty scrota.
But hey, at least you still have a second shot at it. Wish you the best of luck on your second attempt. Welcome home trooper.
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This chapter is AMAZING!!!