Rarity has an untold history of her foalhood crush.
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Huh. This guy has just come up on my list of "Top Five Evil Douchebags", right after Handsome Jack. That's saying something.
And still there's the bad taste of Celestia being willing to kill anypony to save Equestria... except her sister.
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Yeah, that's true. Can't we just skip to the Elements Beam already? Or just kill him quickly?
Or maybe I really do need to skip everything with him from now on...
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Don't do that. Wait at least a few more chapters before making that decision, otherwise you'll miss an important detail on a later event.
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Alright. I'll hold off from my irrational and emotion-based response.*
*Because that's would it would be, really. No excuses.
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I have to say, the only reason I stopped reading your story was because the parasprites *shudder* couldn't stomach that chapter so I avoided this story for a while. Then i remembered Blueblood and I kinda wanted to see what you would do with him... I like Blueblood. As a villain, a bumbling hero, but I hate him as an idiot egotist created just to dump on. If hes gonna be the bad guy make him BAD, if hes good it's forgivable if hes an idiot. Thats what I loved about your story. Then Blueblood's mom... first half of the chapter... I was worried he was going to turn into that cursed villain with the haunted past that somehow gets saved at the end. Dont really hate that but its a bit cliché.
And then... that 180 degree turn, the dark incubus power MFing BOSS. OMG he reminded me of Hanze from Frozen (second best Disney villain). So let's just say I love what youve done here and Ill be catching up your work shortly.