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What happens when an eccentric unicorn makes the discovery of a lifetime, and causes everyone to question what is true?
What if everything you thought was a just story, was in fact history?

Join Twilight as she delves into the history of the world she calls home and questions everything she thought she knew.


AN: Rated teen for mild gore later on. Chapters will be updated and edited when I have the time. Inspired by; HALO, Mass Effect, the Elder Scrolls series, Warframe, sleep deprivation, Mountain Dew and ADHD

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 31 )

Not bad keep the chapters up

Comment posted by dubtrott31 deleted Sep 5th, 2013

3158626 Thanks, I aim to please

RTK
RTK #4 · Sep 5th, 2013 · · · 1 ·

This sounds like it will be good :D

3158723 Glad you enjoy it, and thanks for favoriteing this story

3158865 Nope, sorry to disappoint. I enjoy Halo and I don't want to kill it for others.

-Superman-

3158881 Well there is a reason, which will be addressed in future chapters. But all i can say now is, spoilers

-superman-

So far so good, but get an editor. I've noticed quite a few errors.

I'll be following this story. I hope you update soon.

lol, I looked at this thinking it was a halo crossover, I will read it later, and if you need an editor, I'm available, OCD towards spelling, grammar, and punctuation is helpfull. also, my vita does not like correct spelling, hence errors I may type.

Hi. Let's see here ... in the description, 'helped' doesn't need a capital letter, 'They promised they will come back if they are needed.' needs to be past-tense i.e. They promised they would come back if they were needed.' Also, the 'They' doesn't really need a capitalized 't', 'make' should be 'makes' annd there's a double-space between 'and' and 'build.'

Needs clean up.

I volunteer if you need and editor.

Lol spike got nabbed....
Keep the chapters flowing

Comment posted by Shpoople96 deleted Sep 25th, 2013
Comment posted by Hekate Sketch deleted Oct 22nd, 2013
Comment posted by Hekate Sketch deleted Oct 22nd, 2013

uuhhh, dat authers note, but in all realty this needs to be continuedi am a huge hypocrite in saying that

well, that was an interesting outcome, good so far, dood.

:pinkiehappy: I just realised this was inspired by Warframe. Will there be any Frames involved? Possibly Ash, Loki, Excalibur, Nekros, Valkyr, or Zephyr?

4210101 There will be no direct references to any wareframe, however there may be some very close similarities to many of them. Sorry I cant say much more, spoilers and all that. Although this is not a direct crossover, I did have Excalibur in mind when I wrote SStB's journal in chapter one.

4210194 Then again, I'm insane. You never know what I will put the characters thru :pinkiecrazy:

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:pinkiecrazy: Awsome. Ignorance may be bliss, but insanity is fun.

-You do realise that doesn't make sense, right Snake?-

Shush, Dache. I'm insane too. Why do you think you're here?

huh. so far, this is getting good. ^_^

Umm. It may or may not have been four years since this was updated but i'm liking to plot-line so far.
:'| Anyway! Have a good day sir/ma'm, and please at least think about continuing this. If not, then you might as well change it to cancelled.
-fitzykill1

"I guess your right. After all, whats the worst that can happen?" She says as she drifts off to sleep.

Murphy, get your fat ass over here! A mortal said the summoning phrase!

I love this story. So when is it going to come back?

Oooooooooooooooooooh crap.:facehoof:

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