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Ekhidna


Hobby writer and potentially a complete future one aswell!

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Lyra, after being rejected once again by the archeologist guild in Canterlot, decides to embark on her own to the deepest and unknown parts of the Everfree Forest in the search of her mythical humans, little does she know she will find more than she could have ever bargained for.


*A League of Legends Crossover*
*This follows Lore aspects up to the latest champion I am familiar with, Zoe.*

Cancelled, as the LOL lore changed so much. Many sorries.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 40 )

Hm. Just another 'Lyra looking for humans; fic. Nothin' new-

*Admari is suffering from whiplash*

Did you say League of Legends?

3122427 Yes, yes I did

Well I like it even if my only League experience was being pentakilled to dust for an ungodly length of time. Fucking Karthas? Carthas... Meh fuck it, that asshole that.

I would to see you throw away your life like he did” Lyra stared to the ground, avoiding the mare’s gaze.

I think you forgotten to add this in between.

"I would not like to see you throw away your Loire like he did"

wow, this has alot of promise for it, definantly going to follow it

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League sometimes is fast paced as you rush to keep the enemy from overrunning you.

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If the story is fast-paced and the banana exploded.
made sense?

3127739 Simple reason, this story isnt going to be too long, mainly 4 or 5 chapters more.

Thats why from the very beggining its fast paced, at least to start with it, and as I said before the next chapters are going to be longer and more explained, so dont worry, this was necessary and planned, the motives shall be explained in the future.

This is proving to be an interesting story. I will wait for further chapters.

Out of all the champs you could have chose you choose pantheon (good choice good choice)

And there's the catch *sigh*

maybe they are the responsible for our own existence!”

sadly I have no many supplies left

I have only being attacked three times

I should be exited but I’m so tired now.

thankful at how lucky she had being, not only she had being attacked only three times

but the weather had being calm and it

I stopped pointing out grammar errors after this because they are coming too rapidly to believe you even tried to proof read your own story. If English is not your first language, sorry, but you really need an editor either way.

3172351 yeah, but my proofreaders are too busy right now, thats why until I can find one I will leave this story like this, but thanks forpointing them out, now I can fix those myself =D

The feels! :fluttercry:

Oh dear... *holds him close*

I feel horrible but that ending, kinda made me laugh.

I've never seen a backstory quite like this for an MLP/LoL crossover. I think you did a rather good job of it (the fact that many of my favorite champions were a part of the "final stand" may have influenced that :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:). I have to ask, though, what factors you used to determine which champions were the longest survivors. Was it just your favorites, or did you actually try to consider who would have survived longest?

I must say that this was rather good, but the numerous spelling, grammar, and other errors make me hesitate to add this to my favorites. Regardless, take my upvote and know that I shall be watching for an update.

Write on,
Legion

4671090 I actually consider it, I took into account all their Lore's and abilities, I figured those in the final stand would be the ones holding the most until the end. The Super Strong ones, for example Nasus, Renekton, Kayle and so forth, were some of the last to fall before the last stand.


and for the grammar, yeah, I suck at that. I need an Editor hard....but still no one has step in.

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-I'm mostly a Grammar Nazi an editor, but I do write a little for practice.

—My user page

and for the grammar, yeah, I suck at that. I need an Editor hard....but still no one has step in.

"And" should be capitalized, add "as" immediately after it.
"very badly" or something similar would be better than "hard"
"stepped", not "step"

Is this enough of a résumé for you?

Write on,
Legion

4671588 I freaking love you.

Please, for the love of all that is Pony, be my editor and save me from my hellish grammar failures.

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Forewarning: I prefer to work through Google Docs if possible, and I have been known to take in eccess of a week to get to editing something (usually during the school year, and I tend to actually get it all done in an hour or so once I start). If you're okay with that, PM me and I'll send you my email address.

I look forward to working with you. :twilightsmile:

Write on,
Legion

my only response to this chapter, "they will know lore"

i really hope this fic continues, as it is very good. great depth, although the backstory pieces were a little hard to understand at first. the characterization was spot on in my opinion:pinkiehappy:

5294815 I'm actually rewriting it. Make it better and more readable.

5297211 oh, cool :pinkiehappy:! it's pretty epic as is, i must say. but for readability, i could see that

ITS ALIVE ITS ALIVE MUWAHAHAHAHA

Today is the day of stories I favorited coming back.

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sorry but you snooze you loose :scootangel:

I know this is kind of old, but didn't Aurelion Sol seal a void portal before, and also killed the second Pantheon while doing so, but still.. I feel as if a bunch of champions should be able to go toe-to-toe against the Void when they aren't restricted by the League.

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You said it. But not even him (or any God for that matter) can win against the Void. Malzahar knows this. Aurelion Sol knows this. Targon knows this. Jax Knows this. The Summoners know this. And Cho'Gath, a tiny, microscopic fraction of the Cho'Gath in the Void knows this.

And I am with you, they would be able to go toe-to-toe against the Void itself: Aurelion Sol, Xerath, Kassadin, Jax, Brand... just to name a few. But Runeterra would be destroyed in the end as well. In this take on the lore, the League of Legends is meant to win against the void without losing Runeterra, or at least ensure its future survival in some way, which the achieved.

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The Void is a force to be reckoned with. And Runeterra would be destroyed, sadly... but we have KLED (and Skaarl) on our side. If they dare to step on his land, they are TRESPASSERS! Kled can single-handedly kick the Void's ass.

I wonder what hapened to Xerath, I mean he is pretty much unkillable being made of energy

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