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Honestly I don't even know why I'm here.

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After a faulty Hyperion New-U spawns Krieg in Equestria, he does what he does best. Destroy. Celestia finds him and locks him up, but when the Griffins wage war on the Ponies, Krieg might just be the man Celestia needs....

Yes, most of the stuff Krieg says is from the game, but I have to make some stuff up. Minor gore, but that's if you aren't sensitive. I highly recommend you check out the game "Borderlands 2" before reading this. Enjoy! Btw if you favourite this please leave it a like as well, it just helps me see the progress. Thanks!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 20 )

Shouldn't it be "Friendship is Pain" because thats something Krieg says in the game... :unsuresweetie:

OH GOD I LOVE THIS!! Krieg is by far my favorite character!:pinkiehappy:

3123477 When Krieg issues a duel challenge, he says "Friendship is hate". Don't know where you got the "Pain", just saying :twilightsmile:

3125199 I dont know exactly why or when, but he does say that

you had my curiosity now you have my attention

"You're supposed to make people talk with quotation marks." Otherwise, people get confused. Other than that, it's fine.

This looks interesting. There's too little of it yet for a favorite, but I'll add it to Read Later and see where it goes.

3126644 It's personal preference. Some writers use 'this' for speaking and "this" for quoting. I use 'this' for speaking. Just preference :derpytongue2:

'I am Princess Celestia, ruler and guardian of these ponies. I would like to understand what has driven you to cause such chaos in my land.'

Dude, your using the wrong symbol, it's not the ' ' single markings for dialogue, you're supposed to use " " double markings.

I feel like the inner voice should get his own body.
Reasons:
1. I feel bad for him
2. Magic

3144334 Again, it's personal preference. I read some books and they all used ' ' so........ I just picked up on it.

3146724

Again

Wait, so have I already bit you for that already? I can't remember :unsuresweetie: D'oh well, wateva :pinkiecrazy:

3147049 Nah, don't worry about it. Other people have told me, sorry for the misunderstanding :twilightsmile:

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I don't think his inner voice would get its own body, but I hope it gets a lot more control of Krieg so that he'd be able to stop himself from butchering every pony he sees, only the truly deserving :3

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if he rides celestia in the next chapter.............

eh...predictable. :fluttershysad:

ok, but it could be better.

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