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1) POV transitions still jarring.
2) You seem to like writing these barely restrained but kind people.
3) Will be going through this after Horse Feathers.
1) As I Smiled And Watched My Friends Laugh Their Heads
First: --Tim-- somewhere. It is really disorienting trying to figure out who's talking
2)settling down. Starring.
Staring
3) ..Two month.
months
4) “...Friend don't keep each
Friends
5) temper is almost as bad as Morgans when
Morgan's
6) answer was properly not sunshine
probably
7) react... To me, your family, you
you're
8)Trixie disentangle herself
disentangled
9) the ‘young matron’ vibe, Edith had going
vibe Edith
(remove comma, unnecessary)
10) I blinked, as I got to my feet
blinked as I
(remove comma)
11) vered – if still looking a bit dazed, if for other reasons... - Tim
(remove ellipis)
12) ut he just showed me back
shoved
13) she finished, Abraham shoot up like
shot
14) he'll dance on my crutch wearing
crotch
15) figure it out yourself.” He continued,
yourself," he continued,
Boop
I can feel Morgan's glee. It is awesome.