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1) Oh hey, its Bjorn again.
2) You really need to work on those POV switches. It is quite disorienting.
3) Yay prehensile hair! fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/363/c/f/clapping_pony_icon___applejack_by_taritoons-d5pkxsu.gif
4) Oh dear. I appear to love anything you write.
1) Nearly a week ago... May eight
May eighth
2) Not only that, but he a, didn't seem to notice and b, it was
nut he, A, didn't.....and, B, it was
(makes it a bit more clear)
3) me a nod, he did
nod; he
(semicolon)
4) Where blue and white
Wear
5) Your just jealous
You're
6) Your growing ass-long
You're
7) nd that he for-fills so
fulfills
8) A hairgrowt
hairgrowth
9) A apple-pie
An apple pie
10) instead of a alcove
an alcove
11) Come on, Mr. You and the
Come on, Mister. You
(makes it clearer)
12)"Simply, you very carefully
Simple,
13) I nodded, before walking off. Trying to figure out just what I wanted to ask Edith and how to phrase it...
As my tall, lanky friend walked off from me, the boss and Tim
(Add a little thing like --Abraham-- in here)
14) “You seem far more intelligent than the rest of this rabble of foolish foals. Trixie is curious what you're reading. Would you mind telling Trixie?””
'You seem....telling Trixie'"?
15) “...To little date. Where building
Too little data. We're
16) room and whispered: “She's working
whispered,
17) down next to a outlet,
an outlet
18) had confined in my that he
confided to me that
19) “Your warping... what
"You're
Is the reference to the class bully Bjorn the same Bjorn as your Horse Feathers story character? It kinda fits considering the hints to his background you give.
other missed typoes I noticed:
*shaven
YOU SICK BASTARD
*covering
*cooked, I really, really hope
Hearth's
*to