• Member Since 19th Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen March 22nd

Okhlahoma Beat-Down


I write stories, but that's when I make the effort and I'm NOT writing a secret story.

T
Source

Undisclosed location in the Highlands, Scotland. May 16, 2022.

The Bronies have been preparing for this day for years. The day that their plans, our plans, could finally come to fruition. After a devastating campaign against the Brony community since the Anonymous hacking organization forced many false titles upon the Bronies, all but a few thousand have been shot, arrested, executed, and treated as though they were but rats.

As though they were but vermin.

An abandoned bunker for military purposes has been commandeered by the surviving Bronies for the sole purpose of a place to live, regrow, and, most importantly, develop the technology to move on. To a better place, to Equestria.


Unoriginal, yes. Probably going to get hate, yes. Do I give a toss?
...
...maybe.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 16 )

ooooohhhh! like!:pinkiehappy:

you just gave me an idea, and, adding Stargate on top of it, why base it in a populated country when you can place it in Antarctica, where the Beta Gate was found :twilightsmile:

3290934 I mostly chose the Highlands because it'd be more tense if you get found; and there's a much smaller window to set up defences. Antarctica is also less 'bunkerish', if you know what I mean, since nobody bombs Antarctica for any reason.
But, the other details of why I chose my home country of Scotland will be revealed later.
And a question, and a stupid one that gets asked a lot: Why the dislikes? Before you dislike, leave a comment of WHY rather than dumping thumbs-down on this.

The writing isn't that bad, but the premise of the fic really does make no sense. At all. Whatsoever. No sense at all. After the Holocaust, no one would ever let anything like that happen ever again, and no one would ever get mad enough to do that to fans of a TV show. Sorry, but this fic is bad. Downvoted. I can't even see how you'd explain this, I gotta say.

3296419 Note the use of the word 'vigilantes' throughout this, and 'rumours that Bronies are terrorists'. Vigilantes do what THEY think is right, much like Extremists; no care for the consequences of their actions. Plus, the fact that I've clearly stated how cruel and violent they are, plus this being England, where police rarely use guns over plastic sticks to defend the public, I don't think that a few thousand armed police officers can really halt brutal violence and murders if they happen by the million.
That, and this is set in 2022. A lot can happen; Laws may be revoked, the government might be changed, and overall, any number of wars could break out.
Plus, I wrote this. Read some of my other stories if you think this makes no fucking sense.
My final, and most valid, point: This is a fanfic. It's better than 'teh EdVenTur3z of mah ponyOC cawlled Commandir Fier Exploshun and hish 50 bajiliion gunz thut he usez 2 kill nawty guyz and slepe wiht pruncuss luana and culustiaa' that seems to be uploaded all the time.
But thank you for at least giving a reason.

ch 1 and already faved

3296606

vigilantes and extremists would not unite for this cause, and for sure not in this number

laws and governments would not be changed to this level in not even ten years from now

and yeah, its a fanfic. I had to say it, though. It's just my opnion.

i.imgur.com/K3nFn.jpg

That's all.
Please keep on writing, good sir.:moustache:

3389786

I have that same image on my iPod, but it's Spike smoking a scroll.

Red Light District? Freaking Amsterdam over there.:trollestia:

This story should of a lot more attention. Though a bit old, it is rather a great find. :applejackunsure:

It's alive!:pinkiegasp:
What took you?:rainbowhuh:
It doesn't matter, this story is good and worth the wait.:twilightsmile:

When is the Next one?

yep, got me hooked

Login or register to comment