The Pony Ta

Well, I was really bored.

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TinyIttyBittyponY

TinyIttyBittyponY #1 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

It's a cute story. A nice beginner's writing piece. There are a few grammar mistakes, some bad spacing, and run-on sentences, but if you try, you could get this to be something even bigger.
Also, I really like the original plot.

DifferentOne

DifferentOne #2 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

well this was random.

Cryogenical

Cryogenical #3 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

mfw = wat da fuq.

wlyteth

wlyteth #4 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

Aww that was cute. I wish it had been drawn out a little more but on the whole it was very enjoyable to read.

Wings Of Reparation

Wings Of Reparation #5 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

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MadMan

MadMan #6 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

Original, but chock full o' mistakes. Trim it up a bit and it could be pretty good.

-Hidden Identity-

-Hidden Identity- #7 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

Hmm. Points for original story, points lost for (as people have said) grammar errors. Points for a good mix of random with sense, and some points for characters being in character, as it were. Up-voted.

bucknorris