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:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

This was amazing.

This is so amazingly sad, it's so powerful. You made me cry over a story for the first time in years. Honestly, I haven't cried over any other fanfic, but this...this just broke that.

Thank you.
You really made me realise how precious our short lives are.

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712180
It seems I'm best at sad.

712187
It seems so, but is sad what you enjoy writing the most?

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712192
No, because it makes me cry lol.
Apparently this was EQD quality too, but wasn't related enough to MLP

712201
Keep doing other stuff as well, your ability is obvious. I know you can make great stories that aren't sad, your other works show this.

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712211
I only write what inspiration I have, no matter what it is.

I cried so hard:pinkiesad2: I just have two questions. 1). Who was the narrator? And 2). Who died?

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oc's

712217
Good point, or else your heart wouldn't truly be in the work, it seems to work best that way.

712224 ok. Doesn't make it any less sad.

"Do you like it?"
Yes, yes I do. :pinkiesad2:

That was incredibly well-written and very effective at causing feels. It wouldn't have worked, though, if it hadn't been for the repetition of "Do you like it?" That created within the reader the same sense of obsession that the narrator felt. It connected the reader to the narrator. It also made the story seem almost haunted, or maybe depressing is a better word. Nonetheless, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done, sir.

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A lot of this does rely on repetition

This is... very sad, to say the least.

id be sad if and only if i knew who the story was about but honestly the writing was excellent the repetition made it all the better

sad you say? well see about that

:fluttershysad: great story very sad but in the best way possible. Bravo.

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:
5/5 Fluttershy's for you... It took me a second read through to really figure it out. First time through I didn't read the first sentence well enough and didn't realize that the pony was dead from the very beginning... my favorite story on here. If this doesn't get featured I will be more suprised than I ever have been. I know I sound like I'm gushing but it's really that good.

I died inside.

I think I'm going to have to fave, and check out more of your work.

a3V

Great story. Shame it didn't make on to EqD, but who goes there for the fics, really?

Is like my little dashie:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:
this is powerful in sad

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yes
713884
:/ That isn't really important but okay
714762
I dunno
714791
sad is my best, I think
714869
most of it is troll
714928
It was EQD quality though, apparently. They even went out of their way to thank me for submitting it, so I'm happy enough
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yes
714804
It won't get featured imo, because of the timing of release
715044
Ahaha, this is somewhat different from MLD

I guess your right but is still very sad

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sad seems to be my best

Well them good luck in those stories you have been approved by me

I cried so much. : . ; But I love it very nice job! :heart:

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Thanks

I am crying, in a good way. In a way that I'm recalling my own birthdays, those ideal points in time spent with friends I can never see again. Remembering the parties for others; the anticipation of being with those who love you and whom you love, sharing in a beautiful moment that will never come again.

I'm pointlessly mourning the inevitable. Ceaseless time, giving us these beloved things, moments saved in our minds and hearts, all meaningless records for the dust that we'll all become. Wonderful moments that cannot be again.

I'm crying, in a good way. I won't stop wanting to love being with my friends, my family. Meeting new people, sharing ideas and laughter and tears and knowing that we all are happy and well. For now.

It's always about the memories. They last the longest. Yet they're only born from the moment. We chase down the seconds in hopes to create a lifetime of blissfully warm memories and it's futile and it's humbling and it's wasteful and it's the most important thing in the world... and... hm. I don't know anymore.

Thanks, for evoking these emotions I've tied to moments of the heart. I think I needed a good cry anyway. Thanks.

:pinkiehappy:

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thanks for the well thought out message

717259

Well it took an edit or two - my thoughts and my fingers don't mesh well.

A watch for you. And another thanks. A good cry has put me in a great mood. That's what they're for, right? Tears being literal symbolic vessels for our emotional flood, the tides of our mind riding on dangerously high white caps? Pounding the surf with the rage of an angry ancient sea god, or perhaps a whimper once upon shore, never letting you know that you're about to drown?

Ahem! Yes, carry on.

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Ahaha
It's comments like these that keep me going

this is why i watch/follow people.
for the stuff like this.
i'ma go cry now.

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718311
:/
I made so many people cry
:/
I dunno, that's like...

718317
that's like awesome.
you should do more.

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that's depressing actually :/
even if it does show that I did a good job

I can't stop crying... it was so...sad :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

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:/
S:DFLJDFKLDJKFS:SD:DFLSKDFJ:L
WHY I MAKE PPL CRY

721334
Sometimes sad is my best too. I'm just better at reality tragedy. It'd be hard to incorporate ponies and not totally ruin everything that's good about them.

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722374
Then write tragedy.
You don't have to limit yourself to fanfic, and honestly, it's probably better not to

722378
haha I don't, I actually have an entire folder and notebook full of stories and story ideas, I just like being able to post it where people can read and review it.

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722438
Well good luck with whatever it is you are writing.

Its really gripping and honestly has a subliminal message that life is short and sad no matter how hard you try.

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722761
uh thanks

722809 its meant to be a compliment. :ajbemused:

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:/
I made everyone cry but Alphex who is now banned

This was nice. It didn't make me cry, but I rarely do so don't take that as a comment on your story :twilightsheepish:
The only way I can think of to describe this story is... gentle. It softly toyed with my emotions, but it definitely wasn't boring either.
The repetition helped to reinforce it, and the changes each time were well thought out, the whole thing was expertly written.
Excellent work chap :moustache:

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