There are certain things that need to be done without the general public knowing, things that keep the peace in Equestria without a single word being said about it. This is where the CSF comes in. They are a group of the surviving alicorns banded together under Celestia to maintain order and peace through Equestria... Without anyone ever knowing who or what saved them. They are the ones who are called in to do what the Royal Guards can't. The ones who are called when all hope has been lost... They are, the Celestian Special Forces.
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>>XeRom
One thing I do notice, though, is the occasional grammatical or spelling error. Not that I enjoy the story less because of this, but you might want to take some time to edit your work or get someone else to edit it for you. Just my personal opinion. You can ignore this comment completely if you want. Heck, you can even delete it if you wanted to! So anyway, keep up the good work, I hope more chapters come out soon!
>>331710 Oh no, any criticism I get is appreciated. I do have the person I am working on this with helping with the editing, but something will always slip by. The one thing I have noticed is that it is extremely hard to edit your own work. As for chapters, Wayofthepen and I are working on the next one as we speak.
I'm looking forward to it! I'm glad for regular updates. My stories never really update on schedule. It's hard to work alone.
Oh well. I seem to be able to manage it (somewhat). But I'm rambling here. Can't wait to see how this story turns out! Now excuse me while I click the 'track' button...
It isn't, I'm just having trouble finding time to write, as well as brainstorming for ideas. It's not dead, and the next chapter is being worked on. Albeit very slowly.







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