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XeRom 3314

Joined February 2012
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    XeRom's Stories (3)

    • CSF: Celestian Special Forces

      88,288 words · 320 views · 7 likes · 1 dislikes
    • ACRP - Ghost
      Princess Celestia, desperate about the decline of alicorns, takes matters into her own hoofs.
      4,990 words · 196 views · 6 likes · 2 dislikes
    • CSF: Beginnings
      Celestia, gathering together the surviving alicorns, creates a special forces unit.
      8,995 words · 215 views · 5 likes · 2 dislikes

    There are certain things that need to be done without the general public knowing, things that keep the peace in Equestria without a single word being said about it. This is where the CSF comes in. They are a group of the surviving alicorns banded together under Celestia to maintain order and peace through Equestria... Without anyone ever knowing who or what saved them. They are the ones who are called in to do what the Royal Guards can't. The ones who are called when all hope has been lost... They are, the Celestian Special Forces.

    First Published
    23rd Feb 2012
    Last Modified
    4th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 19 )

    #1 · Chapter 3 · 68w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wasn't this posted already?

    #2 · Chapter 3 · 68w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :eeyup:eyup

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 68w, 5d ago · · ·
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    If you read it, it's completely different.

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 68w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>249833

    >>249924

    This is completely different than CSF: Beginnings. This is AFTER that.

    Here's another way to know. He and I worked together for most of this one, due to it crossing with my story.

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 68w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #6 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Seriously, this story should have more views. It's great!

    #7 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>331631 Well thank you kindly, sir. I do try my best when it comes to writing! :twilightsmile:

    #8 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>XeRom

    One thing I do notice, though, is the occasional grammatical or spelling error. Not that I enjoy the story less because of this, but you might want to take some time to edit your work or get someone else to edit it for you. Just my personal opinion. You can ignore this comment completely if you want. Heck, you can even delete it if you wanted to! So anyway, keep up the good work, I hope more chapters come out soon!

    #9 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>331710 Oh no, any criticism I get is appreciated. I do have the person I am working on this with helping with the editing, but something will always slip by. The one thing I have noticed is that it is extremely hard to edit your own work. As for chapters, Wayofthepen and I are working on the next one as we speak.

    #10 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'm looking forward to it! I'm glad for regular updates. My stories never really update on schedule. It's hard to work alone. :pinkiesad2: Oh well. I seem to be able to manage it (somewhat). But I'm rambling here. Can't wait to see how this story turns out! Now excuse me while I click the 'track' button...

    #11 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>331828 Well thanks again! I'll be sure to check out some of your work, most likely tomorrow, as I'm going to go watch an episode of Band of Brothers at the current time. Other than that, if you need any help, I'd be glad to lend a hand!

    #12 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>331839

    Many thanks!

    #13 · Chapter 12 · 64w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yes! Update!

    #14 · Chapter 13 · 62w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Yes! 11k word update!

    #15 · Chapter 14 · 62w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yes! Another update!

    #16 · Chapter 14 · 62w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Trying to keep up with the demand. :pinkiehappy:

    #17 · Chapter 15 · 48w, 18h ago · · ·
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    >>435871

    It's been a long time since the last update. I really hope this fic isn't dead. It was very enjoyable to read.

    #18 · Chapter 15 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It isn't, I'm just having trouble finding time to write, as well as brainstorming for ideas. It's not dead, and the next chapter is being worked on. Albeit very slowly.

    #19 · Chapter 17 · 36w, 3h ago · · ·
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    >>931524

    Yes! It's been a long time since the last update. I'm going to read it now. Bet the wait will be worth it.

    Just in case you don't know, I'm still Prince Superfire. Just under a different name now.

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