A Secret in the Smile

Rarity has worked very hard to hide the secret flaw in her beauty that's plagued her since the end of her fillyhood. What would other ponies think if they found out?

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i_am_the_jam

i_am_the_jam #1 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

Wasn't the bathroom door locked?

Starry Eyed

Starry Eyed #2 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

Very original, I've been sitting here trying to think of the thought process that lead to this.

I just noticed that the Rarity emoticons have no teeth

bahatumay

bahatumay #3 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

That... resolution. I was amused.

Rhonie8k

Rhonie8k #4 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

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Well then this story would be with out a boiling point wouldn't it. The door wasn't quite closed and Rarity was certain no pony was in the house. She had no reason to believe anypony would just come teleporting in, it's so uncouth after all.

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I thank you for that. Random capitalization is sometimes hard to detect on your own work and the ] came from me almost making that italics as a thought but i decided against it for some reason. Thanks again.
As for the thought process I recently had dental surgery which has left me with an upper denture, bad genetics and a sugar heavy diet not the best combination. I feel I am a bit more like Rarity than any pony else and it would effect her more than the others.

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It would have been boring if Rarity made it back uninterrupted. I was stuck there for a while I didn't want her secret completely out, but she had to run into somepony. I thought about it and I knew Pinkie was the best choise, I tried it with Rainbow Dash but I couldn't justify how that worked out. With Pinkie Pie not only do you have more gullibility you also gain that x factor of the random encounter holding some random resolution. I didn't want this to be tear jerking sad so I figured end on a happy note.

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