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Rhonie8k


I'm not great at this. If you see something you like though let me know.

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This story is a sequel to I Love You Lyra


It's a lovely spring day in Canterlot but Bon Bon only cares about one thing. She just wants to watch Fluttershy as she takes in the sights and enjoys one of the city's most popular attractions. But when an errant misplacement of one of her hooves sets loose an ancient evil the mare finds herself with a new challenge to face and a new roommate.


This story is a sequel to I Love you Lyra as well as a spin off of Luna's Lessons For this story to really make any amount of sense it would be best to read all of I Love you Lyra and at least This Chapter of Luna's Lessons. If you're only interested in this bizarre take on Bon Bon the full events of of Luna's Lessons don't matter but events in the linked chapter do have weight on getting to where this story opens up.

Cover Art by a friend

Rated Teen and tagged Sex for possible saucy themes that may or may not come up
Tagged Romance because it is Bon Bon's driving force even though it may not truly develop

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Well this is a pretty interesting story here so far add I'm assuming this is during between season 1 and 2 so it looks like bon bon is following Fluttershy and Rarity but mostly Fluttershy and she's been taking a lot of pictures of her lately but when both of them disappeared Bonbon out of frustration kick the statue which unfortunately that is the statue of Discord and freeing him and now she's kind of stuck with him because knowing to the situation she is kind of in trouble but I do like how bonbon fight over the mind control that Discord tried to put on her and it looks like he really likes this one I wonder what's going to happen next

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I have to assume you didn't read the previous story or at the very least skipped the chapter of of Luna's Lessons that I pointed to in the description. So this is my set in my own universe where Luna returned relatively naïve and was also sent to Ponyville the adjust to the modern world and be kept away from from nobles trying to use her for her influence. There she befriended Lyra and it feels almost a given when your story has Lyra it should have Bon Bon but i don't ship them and I wanted to give Luna a roommate. Without spoiling to much certain events have led this universes Bon Bon to develop a completely normal and totally healthy crush on Fluttershy. To a very modest extent certain events in universe follow the show, the main example being I gave a totally rational reason for the events of "The Ticket Master" to have occurred. Beyond that I never fully delved into the timeline Luna did discover what nightmare night was and in the show that would have been after Discords first release but that never happened here. Although this part could actually be set just before that part of the story as it was after Bon Bon developed her crush but I'm going to say that this actually happens some time later because if Discord was free during the later events of of that story he would have got himself involved.

Is your story going to continue on

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Yes but there may be a little bit of a wait. I got really caught up in working on a different story and then I took a break from it to do a story for a contest and I've been in a bit of a slump since then. I still want to work on the other story first while I outline the next few chapters of this in my head as I know where that story is going and this one i have ideas for but not sure where I want to go with it long term and I want to plan more before resuming with it.


TLDR Yes just not sure when yet.


Bonus good news though when I do post the next chapter [possibly before] I should have some splendid cover art for it.

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Wow I like the picture cover and that's another rare pairing up kinda almost like a friends forever comic

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Glad you like the art I was super excited when my friend showed it to me. I think it captures the dynamic pretty well, at least as it stand now. Discord intends to get under Bon Bon's skin and Bon Bon just want's be left to her own devices. At the same time it could easily represent a friendship where either just knows all the right buttons to aggravate the other in a non malicious way.

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