3060371 I know, the Powers That Be, and all that. I'm not too worried. They usually wait until the author goes more in-depth about their OC before passing judgment. New chapter up, as well.

3059414 Well someone failed troll school then, as the number one rule of trolling is to not be known as a troll. Also, by acting in such manners as you have, you're just shooting yourself in the foot for future success.

Also, the general public on this site usually knows a thing or two, and stories with a very high dislike to like ratio have reasons as to why. I don't care how smart you claim to be, or whatever classes you're taking; writing is an art form that requires time and patience to nail correctly.

3062115 Yes, yes, I know all of this. And as for claiming to be a troll, I'm lying. I was never really trolling anyone in the first place, and this fic is gonna come out whichever way I want, and I'm gonna get better at story writing as I go. Which would probably mean that I should have mentioned to hold people's judgement on my OC until I go in-depth. Damn you retrospect! Anyway, I'm glad that you don't give a damn about me or my personal life, as I'm simply coming up with this story as I go. Thank you for your not-concern, and I will promise you that my story will turn out for the better, if you promise to hold judgement until then, mmkay?

3062270 Here's the thing; the first chapters need to GRAB the reader, and make them say, "Oh, this is a good story, I want to continue reading this.", not make them leave after one chapter. Stories that make promises of being better the further it gets are never read for long, as ninety-nine percent of them don't get better.

3062377 I'll consider what you said, and while I know the pre-story insight was boring as hell for pretty much all the readers, it's there for a reason. As for the 99 percentile you gave me, well, Challenge Accepted

I liked the pre story insight.