In Equestria nobody is as good as they think they are. Not the queens, not the people, not the crooks. The only thing people have are their virtues, and those are in short supply. In Equestria, when you have a virtue you stick with it. You don't drop it at the curb, because if you don't have a virtue, you don't have anything.
Six young women have their virtues, and they'll trust in only them. They navigate fate. They cross each others paths, but they won't let go of the virtue, even if it means their life.
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You know, guise, I really like comments, if you feel like leaving any.
At first I was confused until I realized it was a human version, probably during prohibition. Then things started to make sense for me.
So far so good now that I get it, but there were a lot of grammar errors. Most of them I could read around but if you are serious about the story I would advise finding an editor.
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So far the two events seem completely separate from one another, except for Rarity being involved. Is there some kind of bigger plot that I'm missing? Who the hay is Rarity working for? What's next for the Apple family? Will Rainbow get some of her honor back? I feel like there is a bigger, as of yet, unexplored world here.
At any rate you should keep going with this.
3169670 Thanks for the comments, and favorite! There is a larger bit of story connecting them, but that won't be revealed until much later on.
Thanks for the suggestions, too. I honestly just get a little nervous about asking people for things, like editing. But, I know I'll have to eventually anyway.
And, if you really like this, I'm sorry for the lack of a third chapter as of now. Been busy with things lately. Ya' know. Video games.
Anyway, thanks again.
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Oh... I know... StarWars Battlefront 2 *cough*...
Forgive me for this, but I thought of an Iron Will catch phrase. *cracks knuckles* Don't be shy, ask that guy.
Sorry... but not really.
Anyway, think of it like a new way to make friends. That's what I do when I'm bored sometimes, I just find a story and ask if they want an editor. Of course they usually say yes, and it is a lot of fun. One of my favorite and most consistently talked to person I met here I met by doing that. Now he pretty much is the heart and soul of Rarity's Dilemma and I go to him for plot advice (the story kind, mind) and such. You might want to do this for other reasons as well... confidence booster... hint hint, nudge nudge....
3172190 Thanks for the advice, but I'm kinda afraid of making friends, pr meeting new people, because I'm afraid that I'll really like them, but we'll just drift apart. It's happened to me before, and it just makes me sad.
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Can I tell you something? I once thought like that. I once thought that being alone is the best thing ever, and being an introvert myself it makes sense. But I would challenge you to follow your thoughts to it's logical conclusion. Is a life spent alone really worth living? Perhaps... perhaps not. I can't answer that for you, but I do know that isolation breeds weakness and confrontation breeds strength. Another way of looking at this is: life is change, and no matter how hard you try you cannot stop the change. Change is the opposite of stagnation, so it is logical to assume that life hates stagnation. Perhaps the reason you feel down about life all the time is because you are fighting the currant of life, instead of riding it like a wave.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUU93YchYBg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iLK_Qg3XcD8
Because I'm a nerd and stuff have this as well
Fear is of the dark side. Fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, hate leads to... suffering.
I see what you did there with the time loop, looking at it from a different perspective. However it was a bit confusing for me, and it didn't really add any new information, except at the very end where we got to take a slightly deeper look at Remy's character. Still, nice chapter all in all and I'll watch for the next one.
3304762 Thanks! I know it was confusing, I honestly got confused while writing it.
Okay, I can kinda see where you are going but I'm not sure so I'll just adopt the wait and see approach.
3462415 Heh. Thanks for the comment.
And, it's probably headed in the direction you think it is.