During his revenge against the Animal Shelter, Dan decided to stop at Burger Phile for a milkshake, a plain burger and a small soda. Then he ends up meeting with a pink haired girl that will change his life.
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Yes! Yes!
An interesting start, and it's not bad so far. I'd recommend an editor or pre-reader to sort out the rough edges.
I will track and follow.
Love it
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Mistershield is following me?!
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Thanks!
Can't wait to see more
One of my favorite ship pairings, certainly better than Twilight and Flash Sentry.
I liked the whole party planner human job thing that Pinkie was given.
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Funny story. I was about to make her an employee at Ninja Dave's Cookie Shop but in a sudden moment of inspiration I changed her into a party planer.
It is a real job with lots of liberty to hang around Dan for most of the day.
*claps slowly* Wow! Two of the most iconic characters on the hub are now chapters away from casual sex!
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More like a few days from a real date.
Pinkie isn't that kind of girl, no sir.
3014588 ya sure?
this is good!!!
make more and will pinkie be giving any talk about her ponyville friends or is she completely human, never was a pony and no knowledge of it at all?
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Nope, she is completely human, though her past might mirror past experiences from the show.
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Home of the world famous Burger Bowl.
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On the internet, everything is possible.
I like turtles.
One word: AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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Me too.
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Thanks!
phone ranged...
That actually HURT a bit to see.
phone rang.
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Oops. Sorry I'll fix it right away!
Thanks for the correction.
i like both shows and i like this story
keep up the good work
OK, I love both these shows and characters. And I love their fanon due to MixerMike's work.
But you have this take place in the "Dan vs" world, Pinkie is a human, and she is not the character from the show.
This isn't even a crossover, this is a "Dan vs" fanfic with an OC that resembles a humanized Pinkie Pie.
That's not a criticism of your story. Just can't really consider this "FiM" enough to read.
Someone got featured....
Can it be? My favorite pairing ever finally written? You sir, are super awesome!
very very very NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Thanks!
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I'm sorry to hear that, but thanks anyway.
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My fisrt fic! Featured in a few hours! Again I'm not worthy!
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Thanks! Not sure about the well written part though. Itend to make all sorts of mistakes.
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Thank YOU!!!![/b]
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You
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Know
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You
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Can
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Do this instead right?
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Fuck it
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Sorry.
I'll try my best next time.
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I'll be better next time!
You cheeky dick waffle.
Your "Apology" just made me want to punch a Dingo right in the pouch.
Couple that with the fact that you really shouldn't be apologizing in the first place and you have a shit shake that I really don't want to drink.
Also, how the hell could you try harder when you den diddity don knome? seriously, it feels like your whole apology was a sarcastic Fuck you!.
Why don't you love me?
Am I not pretty enough? is my heart to broken?
Well, I really hope you enjoy the show then.
Whoa!.....Whoa!......faved~
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I'm sor...ehh....I mean....uhh...I'm just a very apologetic person.
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Thanks for the Fave!
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and 
's to you.
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I still wan't to suck your dick though.
Also, I haven't read your story yet.
When I do i'll make sure to PM you and tell you just how shit it is.
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He learns! may there yet be hope!
Don't stop baby. I'm only getting started.
Who the heck is this Dan guy?
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From the Hasbro original show, Dan Vs. I've never seen it myself, but it's supposed to be really great. Dan hates everything, and everything hates him in return, making for some pretty hilarious scenes. Try watching a few clips on YouTube, that might get you some idea of him.
Total laugh!
yaay ! freakin awesome that's what it is :D. I have a question : What experience do you have in writing ? I find the story to well written for you to be a novice writer.
3016387 somehow I knew I would find you here shield
Dear Morex25, I have no idea who you are but judging by you writing prowess I would assume you are a talented writer. As such I will be following you in the hopes of seeing more interesting writings and such. You don't know who I am and I don't blame you but this isn't important. I wish you best of luck for your later stories. Be careful my friend it does not end at this point.
Yours truely,
ElementOfHope
Physcotic stalking is pinkies life
Time....
For.....
CUPCAKES
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Well I have two stories under my belt on FF.net But this is the first story I write for this site. But still I feel like a novice.
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Stop it, You make me blush.
Still Thanks for yor kind words.
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Very true.
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Mmm...You could make a lot of Cupcakes with Chris alone.
The story so far....well I can say a few things to review. First would be that you have a nice Spence of flow and I like that I can clearly see the timeline of the story. One thing I would add is that maybe you should run through and give your story a look over. There are quite a few typos and grammatical things but this is an easy fix. If I was you j would have someone look it over. Well that looks to be about it. I will be awaiting your next chapter and good luck till then.
Currently cursing the creator of the original kindle fire,
ElementOfHope
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Only in his deprived mind could he conjure something so wretched.
That's what I like about him.
A little rough with the small amounts of spelling and grammatical errors, but still a rather pleasant story. Although I have to say it is a bit of a strange shipping.
I would also like to see more of Dan rantings and raving in this story, as well as more unique adventures, rather then brief summerization of episodes from the awesome Dan VS show ^_^;