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Supplemental slice of life chapters to The Wheel and The Butterfly
A misanthropic man finds himself sharing an apartment with a bubbly, hyperactive girl. A pink pony turned human is doing her best to adjust to a new world. Together they will get through sharing living space without killing each other... probably.
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Ok, I love this fic. the comedy is awesome here! You've done an amazing job! Can't wait for more fun with Dan and Pinkie!
I'm all for anything that gives me more PinkieXDan! Especially stories that take place pre-relationship
This is amazing. Continue please.
So good...so very good...want more...
Time to get medieval in his High-knee!!
can this be read on it's own?
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You'll miss a few details initially, like why Pinkie is staying with Dan, how she got there, but the first chapter is pretty safe to read on its own. Things will probably rely on the main story a bit more as I go on.
Awesome man! Also I remember you said that Dan put the soda Dan < error and that Dan began to startle Pinke ( straddle)
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Got these! Thank you!
The banter was always my favourite part of this series. Now it's like I get dessert without having to finish dinner first!
Favorited and liked before reading. No regrets.
Don't worry, Pinkie, you'll get 'im.
That'll make the sex really awkward...
Yeah, REALLY awkward.
The whole bra struggle is hilarious.
"Orbs"?
I can picture Dan dragging Pinkie to Chris' house, marching up to Elise, pointing angrily at Pinkie's chest, and yelling "EXPLAIN TO THIS IDIOT WHAT THESE ARE CALLED!"
A sentiment shared by every woman ever at some point.
I just died.
Any other man would enjoy the show. (Well, any man who isn't gay. And even then...)
Wait...that means...not even panties? *suffers a nosebleed and passes out*
So...pink...
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Even in your sidestory, corrections!
structure's
off
doofus
Missing quote mark at the end.
Rather than splitting this into two sentences (which technically isn't the case, because that second "sentence" is actually a fragment), you should have a colon after 'sound'.
Oh, and you're missing the word 'he' between 'as' and 'heard'.
Comma after 'ground'
Missing period at the end.
Lose that comma.
Missing punctuation.
Missing a period at the end.
click, then
snugly
watched
having
Missing period.
beet
Floating stray quote mark there.
Mr.
Should be a comma, not a period.
Missing space there.
and give
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Aaaaaand fixed!
Now to try and get to your corrections on TWatB.
Heh.
And maybe try to fix the chapter after that.
Hehehe...
And the one after that.
Hehe...
And then write more of part 2 of this and the next installment of TWatB.
Hehehehehehe...
Is anyone else concerned I can't stop laughing?!
Chest lumps contained!
That made my day XD
This story is absolutely brilliant. Your characterization is so superb its insane! Like/Fave/Follow!
Pinkie is so adorable with being a nudist.
The scene I have been waiting for! Pinkie yelling at the heavens in frustration.
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That is one most unfortunate acronym.
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Maybe I should just call it "The Wheel", or something...
...I ship this now.
Also, as a teenage girl, I sympathize with Pinkie on this--
--that's what sport bras were invented for!
Plus, Dan is my spirit animal. I might have to start watching his show.
4352138 BTW, what are you gonna do when you run into the 200 chapter cap over there?
Hahahahahaha!!I don't know who this Dan is, but I love how he rages, it's so funny!!
i already know Pinkie Pie - this is awesome!!
Great Job!
*I guess I should go back and read the other story tho...
if not you have made me the happiest person right now, as i cant get enough of dan x pinkie
4353161 dan is from the show 'dan vs.' this entire story is set in his world its a good show i suggest watching it
4353242 If you mean show as in T.V. Show... I don't watch it.
4353259 top half was for author but either way, yes its a tv show it was made by cartoon network but i believe they canclled it or stop making it after the third season i only watch random episodes and those that have characters mentioned in the story so that i can get an idea of backstory
4353296 Ooooh I gotcha. Alright. Fixed.
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Guess I'll just have to write a sequel.
Holy frig this is hilarious!! <XDDDD
4353415 Like the 800+ chapters of Austraeoh
SS&EImploding Colon has going as five different stories?4353743
These will hopefully be real sequels with distinct beginnings and endings...
Uh, excluding stuff like this.
Oh I adore missing moments chapters :)
It'll be cool to have see more of this pairing.
I'm enjoying this so much. Keep up the great work.
my face hurts from how much this made me laugh, good job
more, please. This is just perfect.
You know you need Pinkie to manifest her early 90s rap persona now (I assume her street name is "Vanilla Frosting") and rap at others now, perhaps the bakery workers could learn to put less shoes in products through the power of rhythmic talking and beatboxing sounds?
Dan seems to have an exaggerated temper, but then again he's been dealing with Pinkie Pie for the past few weeks. Honestly, I was really bummed out that you don't have moar. But anyway, I think I can be patient.
.
.
.
*twitches*
To be perfectly honest, I feel like Dan is overdoing it. I know from watching the show that he has a volatile temper but I really think he should tone it down a little otherwise he'll die from Tsundere Aids.
I am so far liking this hope for more!
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I can sort of see that, but on the other hand Pinkie is probably an incredibly difficult person/pony to share a tiny apartment with, especially if she's more clueless than usual.
Damnit stop making me laugh.
Wait.
No, do the opposite of that. Oh you already did? Awesome.
Dan, Dan, Dan, Dan... I expected better from you than to forget to make a contingency plan for this surprisingly-likely event.
Also spelling.
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Whoops! Fixed! Thank you!
I'm not sure if you've been asked this yet, but are you going to write anything with Dan & Pinkie's rock farmer family in either this or Wheel and the Butterfly? Like meeting thru the mirror or something. Got to meet "the in-laws" sometime, right?
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The likeliness of them showing up at some point is pretty dang high.
Just a matter of finding the right time in the story and getting to that point.
Give her to ME then, I wouldn't REMOTELY have a problem with it!
Oh GOD no! Don't DO IT, Pinkie! You'll die a horrible death from HIDEOUS MAN SMELL!
I laughed my ass off at Dan's chain of horrifying metaphors. My pony and my zebra too.
And now I have the giggles.
Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
That sound you hear is me shitting myself from laughing so hard.
OH MY GOD **DIES**
Oh, Pinkie. Don't ever change...
Corrections:
his
on
Period should be a comma.
Missing 'he'.
me
Missing quote mark.
hopeful
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Got these! Thank you!
And I haven't forgotten your other list of corrections on The Wheel, just juggling them with this pile of ongoing stories I set myself up with.
Cover art and your Avatar won me...
you crafty son of a bitch
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What can I say? I'm a man who knows what he likes.
One of these days i will die from the lack of oxygen i lose at all that laughing you make me do
on a more serious note love it
. i love dan and pinkie's interactions its so hillarious
thank you sooo much for writing this you make my day all the brighter
A fine job indeed good sir keep it coming
