This story is currently on hiatus as I'm in a huge writer's block for this story. Hopefully, by writing some different stories (I have one idea because of a dream I had) I will become inspired to write this one again.
Princess Luna is tired of her sister's constant orders, so she decides to run away. Luna decides to go to a neighboring country to see if ponies will accept her there, though she has her doubts. But when she meets a stallion by the name of Luminance Eternal and a pony named Awakened Star, she realizes that someponies just might be nice and accepting.
Princess Celestia is furious with her sister and sends guards out to look for her.
But there's a pony even more evil then Celestia waiting in the wings, anticipating the moment when he can fully serve his only true princess, Celestia.
Needs to be a bit longer before I can really rate, though I would advise shortening the story description.
Tell us the general gist of the story, that she's fled from Celestia's treatment of her. Everything after should all be found out in the story, as it progresses.
9917 is the description better now? I really want this to be a pleasant story, so... and I'm going to star on the 1st chapter today
Go to mexicolt!
No go to Canterda!
Neighway October to March and Ausponia April to September.
10059 um what 9946>>9958 wouldnt those both still be in equestria 9917agreed
Im really looking forward to this story updating keep up the great work
Damn ,they even have guns here.
So the queen obviously isnt that better then celestia, maybe just wants to use luna to get equestria.
..........a gun.........gun?...........OK im going to have to wait for the next chapter im really hopeful that this story doesn't turn out overly dark
Also quick question in this fic is every alicorn able to use magic as powerful as luna (ex moving the moon ex2 probily able to reak unholy vengeance / even though not being nightmare moon)
also im looking forward to when she get a chance to explain how old she is 
im actually hoping that being alicorns is just some traditional illusion the royal lineage uses to fool the lowly peasant to follow them ,waking up as a alicorn like Star and Illumin did is kinda a killer even with "ITS MAGIC" as a explanation.
13685 don't worry, I won't turn it completely dark. The only really dark thing is the guns and the fact some of the guards are really loyal to their leader
13685 don't worry, I won't turn it completely dark. The only really dark thing is the guns and the fact some of the guards are really loyal to their leader
they have magic, yes, but not they're not as powerful as Luna. Queen Astral ism but that's because she's a queen
13745 i second that
You gonna be wishing on a four leafed clover
when the IRS tells you to bend over
would everyone like if I change the ending of the last chapter? I want to please everyone as best I can, so if my ending of the last chapter wasn't good, I'll gladly change it. I'm sorry for the sudden drastic change
I really want to let everyone be happy 
WTF does On Hiatus mean
31462 it means I'm taking a break, so that I can revise this story and make it better
Luna and Luminance together ('
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35006 thank you. it's comments like yours that really get me motivated to continue writing. thank you
