Due to popular demand, this is now a three-part story. I'm currently working on chapter/part 2, so look for that soon ^^
Twilight tries to help Applejack and Rainbow Dash go on a "date", but when she stays up too late and drinks maybe ten too many energy drinks, she becomes tired, sick, and very crazy. Will she ruin Rainbow Dash and Applejack's "date"? Again, a simple one-shot... maybe. I might continue it with a second attempt at a date or something. I'll leave it as incomplete for now :)
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I feel for Twilight. I've been at that stage of tired before.
All too many times.
Oh well - better luck next time, Dashie!
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If you think you feel sorry for her now, just wait 'till the high wears off...energy drink hangover from heck!
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And that horrible, dawning realization that the blood on the walls isn't all hers. Yeah, like I said, I know the feeling.
Seriously, it'd almost be worth seeing a second part just to see Twilight's reaction when she realizes how badly she screwed things up.
8694 AND, how somepony would screw up every consecutive date until Rarity, Twi, Shy, and Pinkie have each ruined at least one date each until Dashy and AJ just wait until everypony else is asleep before finally getting that ferst keesss b'neath Luna's Moon.
Can't wait....
It was pretty cool, although I would like to see a second part when everything goes well
MOAR!
GET ON WITH IT!
GET to the awesome appledash date scene! RBD wants that sweet apple pie!
comment said no comment. story is lacking depth or something. it has draw but not enough.
but do not give up or be discuraged keep going!