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Prolet


I'm a 19-year-old brony from a backwater welfare nation known as Finland. I study history at Oulu University.

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Twilight has written a short story.

Unfortunately, letting others judge your creations isn't the easiest of things.


Thanks to MasterFrasca99 for editing.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

I know dat feelz, dood.

I get that same panic attack each and every chapter I post on this site, dood.

Comment posted by TwizzleDragon deleted Aug 8th, 2013

That was a very realistic experience on how that sort of thing works. I know I felt how Twilight felt when I posted my second story, and even my third. Good little story. :twilightsmile:

Masentavan tuttu tunne joskus! :twilightsheepish:

Nice.
But writing a story about a writer worrying about a story?

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Why? You're writing under a pseudonym. I mean, of course there's some level of emotional as well as practical investment in it, but if you screw up too badly, you can scrap it and start again.

3013512 I like this pseudonym though, and I'm in the mind set that if I'm going to write, I'd rather write so that others can enjoy it with me, dood.

While not a damn person knows me on this site outside of the fact that I'm a unknown age person acting like a demonic penguin, I still don't want people to think that same Unknown-aged person that acts like a demonic penguin isn't a moronic window-licker that gets his jollies reading and writing about purple unicorns having a dick and using it on as many mares as possible, dood.

Poor Twilight... You saved Equestria twice, saved the Crystal Empire once (OK, Spike helped), but just one time you confuse there/they're and you're hated, as Pinkie might say, FORRREVERRRRR. :twilightsmile:

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I already have another pseudonym picked out for my next big screw-up: "Not Darth Wedgius" It's the perfect disguise!

3013584 Maybe if I mess up, I'll just make up 'Fusion Fool the Fourth' in that case, dood.

This is the point where you slap Twilight. :flutterrage: She needs it.

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slaps you instead

She needs to do this alone....
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Also, some of us like seeing Twilight like this.

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Well for the people who deal with this on a regular basis like the mane 6, they know that it needs to be nipped in the bud right away or stuff like this happens.

The Cutie Mark Crusaders need an adult.

It's a short, simple, relatable tell about publishing anxiety. Worth reading.

I will be reading this story more than once (in detail) in order to "objectively" evaluate this story.
Many questions come to my mind while trying to give this story a review. While most of them are trivial, I rather have my mind clear. I think only the author (him or, herself) can give a conclusive answer to my questions.
I hope we can communicate soon.

P.S. I really hate being cold hearted while talking about someone's work. I hope we can talk... it would really help me clear my mind of any doubts while trying to reach a veredict. I'm new to the reviewing process, so any other guidelines to the reviewing process (besides the ones from the Authors Helping Authors rules and, reviewing sections) would be highly apreciated.

Or: Why I haven't actually written any stories.

Great, loved it.

This story is so relatable! :twilightsmile: Is it OK if I do a reading of your story?

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Yes, that would be nice :)

8905285 I did a reading of this. :) Reading

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