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TheOldPonyFromScene24


I love meeting new people, but they terrify me.

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Once, Princess Twilight Sparkle flew among the clouds. To her frustration, every attempt since has been failure. She desperately seeks help from her friends, determined to once more touch the sky. Will her friends be able to help her get airborn?

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Nice story. Very uplifting.:rainbowwild:

2932776 you're obviously making a joke, but I can't tell if you sincerely liked it or not, so I have no way of knowing how I should react. but since this is the first comment on one of my stories on this site, I will reply to it with the smilie I've most wanted to use. :moustache:

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To be honest, I only noticed the joke myself after I wrote the comment, which amused me to no ends. (At that point I added the smiley as well:pinkiehappy:)
But yes, I truly liked the story.

I can't help but feel Twilight is cheating, what she is doing isn't any different that what she has already done as a unicorn when falling down the Cristal Empire stairs. I kind of expected the answer to be that she was over thinking it and she just needed to relax and do it by heart instead of thinking how to do each steep.
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Nice short story, have a like. Less than 75 views, only 5 likes and 3 favs and 2 comments? This story needs more love.

“Trust me, Fluttershy. I've got plenty of books that mention this. It even has a name! The 'fastball special!' Why would so many people use it in fiction if it didn't work in fact?” She said, desperately trying to believe her own argument.

So much yes!

“An' I caught her tryin' ta use mah brother as a launch pad. She was standin' on his hoof, tryin' ta get him to chuck her into the air.” Applejack, seeing the look on Rainbow Dash's face, immediately regretted sharing this. “Rainbow, don't you even think about it.”
“Too late, already did!” Rainbow Dash took off toward Sweet Apple Acres. Applejack put her hoof to her forehead in annoyance.

Even better! :rainbowdetermined2::eeyup:

2947746 it was only after this fic went up that I rewatched Crystal Empire and realized it had actually happened in pony canon.

2947757 That scene is one of my most favorite things that the show has ever done.

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