Thunder Rain, his name given by his parents in high hopes of what he would be, doesn't like to fly, in fact he'd rather spend his time at community sewing lessons! Thunder just can't tell his parents, but how is he going to keep going on like this, flying by day and sewing by night? Sometimes, you just have to take a leap of faith and hope the world understands.
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Hmm, i think you forgot to capitalize something there...
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Thanks, I fixed it
2875897 That's the only error I could find. Great story.
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Keep an eye out for anymore in upcoming chapters, I proof before I post, but sometimes I miss things Thanks!
it's spelled stitch...
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lol
I'll fix that
yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes
I'm going to wast all my time correcting errors.
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WAST, thank you....
EDIT: Fixed, apparently wast is a word, so spellcheck didn't catch it.
2881935 I know. I think its past tense of something.
Common mistake, it's you're welcome.
I'm reading the the story!
I have... air clentched in my teeth.
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Also, first view! Do you wish for me to tell you about those double spaces, too?
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by first view, you mean you're the first person to look at the new chapter....
I feel really stupid about those mistakes
But thanks....
2884821 Yes, I do.
Aaaw, don't feel stupid! I already filled my quota of making someone sad!
Also, in Earning Your Wings' description, you said weild; it's wield.
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I'll fix that, but I still think Earning your Wings turned out WAY shittier than I expected.....I'm not even sure if i want to finish it
2884886 DEEEEEELEEEEEETEEEE!
That'sh how my stories, go, except this one that I'm re-writing.
And re-writing.
And re-writing...
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lol, so what, I should delete it? I have a bardcopy on my comp so I could repost if I felt like it....
EDIT: HARDCOPY
2884902 EDIT: THE WORD.
Sure, you could delete it. Do you want people seeing it?
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alright, i think i'll do that
2884924 Okie Dokie Lokie!