Mission Foreign Intercept; a perfectly ordinary mission, examining a foreign object just entering Earth orbit. Five crew members recover a... strange artifact; one that may change their views on life forever.
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Word Wizard
Hey there folks! I used to be known as gardian20, in case you knew and loved that name, sorry, it's GONE. I'm a fanfic-writing oboe player from Maryland, who wishes he was British. Enjoy the stuff!
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Well humanity.READY YOUR NUKES!!!
Fortunately, the poison gas is ineffective against humans
The message wasn't intercepted by the aliens, why?
The message is understandable to humans with no need for translation, why?
The message was opened immediately without being examined at length by a full investigative team, why?
I'll give you Twilight asking for help she knows is impossible given the time constraints, due to panic, though IMO she doesn't panic in quite that way. Even so, this is too flawed for me to upvote.
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This is an example of: quick and dirty doodlings at the keyboard. I literally cranked this out as a 30 minute oneshot without giving it much thought. It doesn't deserve anything. You are completely right :D
3825998 I'm glad you took the criticism so well! Good luck on improving your writing, which should happen as long as you write and accept criticism with as much enthusiasm in both areas as you seem to show.
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Thanks. (To be completely honest, I hate this story too.)