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Part 1

In the snowy mountains of Tundra a small group of hunters struggle to keep their village going while surviving snow storms and monster attacks. Oats, Issac, Tich, Walker and Catherine receive word of a new cave appearing in the mountains and are sent out to explore. Little did they know they got more than they barged for.

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hehe nice
:pinkiesmile:

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good story so far cant wait for more

seems interesting, I wonder whats going to happen though? and from what I have gathered from this chapter the hunters seem to represent certain elements of harmony, im waiting for the next chapter

Great Story it could be longer but still good

Very Interesting part I wish to read more. This new character Walker is very Inserting to say the least. Great Work:pinkiecrazy:

... Oats just HAD to pee on that particular wall didn't he? worst way to meet a new species imho... but funny as hell :rainbowlaugh:

Feyline, not Malynx but otherwise good.

so will we hear interacting in both worlds then just pony one right?

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Issac=Laughter.
Oats=Kindness.
Tich=Honesty.
Catherine=Loyalty.

I'm guessing the fifth hunter is Generosity.

3290108 that sounds close enough, now, who, oh who will make it all complete? :trollestia:

TAKE ME TO YOUR LEADER

Oats face palmed

so did I :facehoof:

it felt like a team fortress saying you would hear in game almost with that ending i hope the princesses appreciate the fact they took down the rampaging monster with a awesome party cannon and not let petty wording of a dumb drunk lure them to a needless rage and hostile paranoia over one sentence of words side they were not that nice who want to be surrounded by hostile looking guards and anger face's after a fight and they didn't even get there to help in time talk about bad timing and just rude impression all around! no one wrong or right this time but hopefully no undeserving innocents get to hurt in the end.

3379909 Thanks for your opinion it will be noted:twilightsmile:. Also as you may or may not know dunkness is the side effect of the antidote so its not Issac's fault. The antidote tastes awful anyway :pinkiesick:

This was excellent. Last bits got a lot of chuckles out of me.

3380081 Glad you enjoyed it:twilightsmile:.

3379988 so poison and antidote is like an equation for all night party for drinking to get that kind of drunk effect? wow poor guy he gonna have an hang over later.:pinkiesick:

I have to ask... what is this a crossover with?

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Its a cross over with a game series called monster hunter.

3524185 I was wondering why this was in here.

Gigginox see with heat sensitive organs not whatever this essence stuff is.

3594308 I did not know that:rainbowderp:. How interesting. I will have to include that in future chapters. but remember that Oats farther had damaged his sight so they may not work properly. I will adapt the future chapters.Thanks

3596654 No problem, you should probably check out the monster hunter wiki for more stuff about monster physiology.

some quotation marks missing here and there but i am loving it

All the images are broken

I made it here, and it was a good ride.
The only problems i've seen are punctuation (Quotation marks, comma, etc) and image errors (broken links).
I like it :D

It's Isaac not issac i should know my name is Isaac

This volrax fellow... I like him.

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