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Shadowscythe
That the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" — John Keating (Robin Williams), Dead Poets Society.
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AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fuck yeah. That lucky bastard got to do Twilight Sparkle.
:D should have named it Sunny-D instead.
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I see that you have gotten the tongue in cheek joke.
ok editing for this chapter is not an unusual mistake but when you switch speaker's start a new paragraph and line to separate the speakers from one another. also when thinking in their head try using different notation like '...' or "..." to annotate that it is not spoken aloud at the beginning of the thought instead of at the end.
MOAR NOW
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I am currently putting the finishing touches on another chapter. I will attempt to post it later today.
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Thank you for the suggestions, although could you clarify the "..." part? If you could please make an example sentence so I can emulate it, I would be grateful. Thanks.
2940144 yay
Nice job on the part with pinkie pie's blood. Cracked me up. And normally it is hard for people to make me laugh
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I am glad you enjoyed that. I pretty much thought of what would be the most interesting consequence from drinking it. To which I ended up with the poor soul completely spacing out and receiving debilitating chest pain and uncontrollable twitching. This also included terrible nightmares if they were foolish enough to go to sleep. It seemed fitting as the only one that I fathom could handle Pinkie Pie's blood is Pinkie Pie herself.
P.S. Another chapter is on its way and I will be posting it later tonight.
i said this before but, when you switch speaker's start a new paragraph and line to separate the speakers from one another. it helps the story flow better.
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Hmm, After doing some more research I will attempt to do this. It is just going to require a bit of editing I believe. As always I am still trying to get used to writing. Thank you for the suggestions.
2983728 NP it is a very common mistake and you are not the worst offender i have seen entire stories that are just a wall of text no spaces at all.
In reference to the suggestion made by plp855, I am going through my story and editing it to make it easier on the eyes. I have to admit, using his suggested format does make it better to look at. It also has the added bonus of making my search for grammar mistakes more manageable.
2982408 YYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY
Finally, I had just finished formatting the text from the chapters. I hope that it makes it easier for people to read.
After long consideration while I have been editing this story and in the spirit of proper tagging, I decided to pull the "Tragedy" tag. While the story does indeed include tragic events, it is not a main theme. True tragedies almost always end up with some horrible end for the hero(e.g. Shakespeare's Hamlet). It also restricted me too much in that most positive outcomes would rarely happen due to the tragic nature. While Blood Moon is often reckless, he does not always fail in what he is trying to do. So in turn I removed it on the same grounds of why I did not include the "Romance" tag, it was a secondary theme, not a main one. The two main themes of the story are just "Adventure" and it being "Dark". So those two are the only ones to remain.
P.S. Do not worry, the gore, sex and mature are also to remain as they are.
Blood Moon is a terraformer? media.cmgdigital.com/shared/lt/lt_cache/thumbnail/960/img/photos/2013/04/22/5e/ca/Mars-3.jpg
Well, a new corporation called the RDA have some job openings....
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Ha, nice. No, he is just a vampire with a lot of free time on his hooves.
3019375 The RDA is not happy at all. encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTzyUmlDAoBSg8PyOaIiHqf7AkCqhN6FXDpuj7NHbf5LZYiAjhYkw
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I prefer blood for the blood god anyway...
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Slaneesh. Because CLEAVAGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
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Okay I admit, that one made me laugh in real life. Bravo good sir.
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Thanks. Have a skype?
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I apologize, but I do not use skype. Although, I usually use Steam or AIM.
A new chapter will be coming out tomorrow. I normally prefer to get these out by friday, but this weekend was significantly more hectic than I was anticipating.
Very good!
I have just completed chapter 9 and I am just going through its editing process. It will be out either later tonight or sometime tomorrow.
Update: It is going to be tomorrow. A delightful skunk decided it wanted to spray somewhere outside my house. The stench is so vile that the resulting headache is making it too difficult to concentrate on finishing my editing process.
3095944 excellent
3095944 lolz JK
There, I kept my promise of getting chapter nine out today...with only nineteen minutes to spare...
Well... Shit.
3101836 Yeah, it appears I decided to turn Blood Moon into a vampiric baked potato.
Chapter 10 will be coming out sometime over the weekend.
Update: Chapter 10 will be out on Monday as I ended up having to rewrite a bit of it. It did not flow properly and it also needs a few more edits.
There we go. Chapter 10 has been completed and posted, enjoy.
BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3148264 I am glad that you enjoyed chapter 10. It was a bit sappy, but it was still a delight to write. I am also happy to see that you are doing better.
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COFFEE!
Btw, android 4.2 is sooooo different, im on mobile.
For anyone still reading this story. The next chapter is going to be a bit delayed(maybe until next weekend) as I am going to be going on a trip. A small spoiler though to tide you over is the chapter name will probably be "No rest for the weary".
Update: Most likely the next chapter will be after next weekend due to the trip.
Chapter 11 will be posted tomorrow. It seems that I did not have a great amount of time to write anything on my trip and so unfortunately, it has been delayed quite a bit.
Chapter 11 has been posted, Enjoy.
CUM ON!! *come* FUCKING CLIFHANGER!?!?
3239156 Bwhahahahahhaha.
3240297 :D
Hello everyone, I am currently working on chapter 12. However, my new job is going to be delaying my chapters a bit from here on in. So in turn while I would love to continue to write a chapter every week, it is unfortunately going to be a "I will post it when it is ready" sort of situation. I do hope I can avoid the pitchforks and torches.
Chapter 12 has been posted.
WAHOOOOOOOOOO NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I find Night Star cute.