"Twilight, I'm so sorry!" sobbed Pinkie Pie, her tears puddling at her hooves.
Twilight stopped and looked over her shoulder solemnly as the rest of her friends filed out the door wordlessly. "I know."
The door slammed shut, and Pinkie Pie was all alone.
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Sounds good. I'll read it later, when it's complete.
Ok, I am curious now...
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hopes this gets intense
Sounds good so far. Can't wait to hear more
Umm... Is this going to be a real sad story? I mean Rainbow didn't die right? Right?
Oh God she did, didn't she.
You are a monster. 
(Seriously though it sounds like it's going to be a tragedy. I'm interested but worried at the same time.)
Fuck you! How DARE you cut it short!
Anyways, anger aside (bastard) it was pretty good! I'm interested in what Pinkie did, even though this will probably be 3 or 4 chapters long. Seems promising. A hopefully good read.
Is it going to be the return of Pinkamena?
Curious so I'll follow this for now. Please post more soon.
I'm curious, but besides that I didn't enjoy the story all that much....
The writing style is what put me off, I guess. I'm just used to different authors, probably.
If I remember, I will definitely check back later to see if there's been an update.
I HAVE TO WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!?
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I found a few mistakes. Do you have a proofreader/editor? If not, I could help if you're looking for one.
Really good. Very few errors but, I would consider getting a proofreader. Keep up the good work!
2889170 Due to the lack of a dark tag I'm gonna have to go with a no, but I'm not the author so...
this isnt going to end well is it? what could she have done that was so bad.
You have my curiosity...
and this is where the shit hits the fan so to speak :/
I hope pinkie is alright
dis gon be good.
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Although I'm probably not the first to think of it.
I think I figured out what happens. It is my theory that Pinkie Pie somehow killed Rainbow Dash with her prank.
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Well yeah I mean the words about Rainbow are pretty ominous.
Can't wait to see the outcome! This is gonna be good!
So when's the next one coming out?
Sooooo.... Never, than?
3383920 my apologies, school has been hectic and this story wasn't my top priority. i will try to get a chapter up very soon
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I hope she dies. that would be the best day of my life heck i even laughed when she died in cupcakes.
seriously though am i the only one here that doesnt care that dash might dead and is actually celebrating? At least it wasnt fluttershy.
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Hey, just because Rainbow is an arrogant mean bitch slaver sometimes doesn't mean she should die. It means that she Just needs to be slapped around for a while. (Glad it wasn't Fluttershy myself.)
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Yeah that's a good point. A good smack is better because boy doesn't she need it. Death is too perment because she wouldn't learn anything.
Dammit, I find this story that looks really good, and then I find out it hasn't been updated since 2013! Dammit!