Booker and Elizabeth are teleported by an unknown force into Equestria and they must learn...friendship...and killing other ponies. Will the mysterious pack of ponies as well as Booker and Elizabeth defeat The Founders, or will they fall like Columbia to a pack of colorful ponies?
...Well, I can say that I'm mighty interested!
2751587 Thanks for...um...liking my story. And, to be honest, never thought I get 7 favorites in one day
Plus, if you like, SCP Pinkamena, you can help me for some ideas. Just saying.
But...hmm...never got this far before. I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO NOW
But as the Lutece's family said:
Maked, make, will make.
And I finished, can finish, or will finish this trucking story.
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Make, Made, Will Make. MISTAKE NUMBER ONE! AND IN YOUR COMMENT NO LESS
FFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-alright. Trick question: Do you consider the Lutece's to be dead...or 'dead'?
this pleases me great work
MOAR!!!Also, how often do you update? Also, please don't bring in the lutece twins, I hated them. Also, how much ammo does booker has?
2759663 Um...would it be a bad thing if I planned them to be in it? Their only there for like...maybe one or two chapters, but they won't have much effect on the story. Is...that okay?
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i don't really hate them, more like confused about them. i have no clue about how they work. can you also answer my other questions, that is if you want to.
SONGBIRD???!!!!
Oohhhh SHIIIIIIIIIIT!
2759663 How often I update? I promise you that their will be a chapter every one or two weeks. And ammo? Theirs magic! Who needs ammo? You got magical bullets!
should be:
"I WILL MOTHER BUCKING DESTROY BOOKER!!"
2777397 sorry..I was a little tired and I worked on this first thing I woke up. So...yeah...
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Depends on your concept of "dead"
Dies, Died, Will Die
Lives, Lived, Will Live.
It's all a matter... of perspective.
FIIIIIIIIIXXXXXEEEEDDDDD!
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i don't really hate them, more like confused about them. i have no clue about how they work
they only give you clues that's just about it but they are really creepy. there has been movies that where people do the same thing. I think one of them is james and the giant peach wen the kid is talking to the random guy on the wall. I don't remember haven't seen the movie in year. and if that didn't help them I am so sorry maybe another time i'll help you answer something else.
Hey, I like how your doing this but you might want to read through your chapter again to fill in the words you left out. They are scattered throughout the entire story and it gets to become a bother to read. Your story shows promise, it just needs a little fixing up.
Is this after the game, during, or before? Because after the game, booker dies by drowning
3306745 After, but I changed the ending.
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Ah, ok.
Really cool fanfic,I really liked
You gonna continue the story?
4114070 Soon.
I lost it at that part
What? No! If you're cancelling it, at least leave the story up for others to see!
4442948 Maybe, I don't know. I just don't see the reason why it should still be up here. Sorry.
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Well, I don't see why it shouldn't. It's not like there's a lot of people commenting on it, and you're getting a lot of notifications. It's not like some kind of blemish on your FIMFiction career.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yu_RmSJxtUE
i was so hyped for this story! but it is your story so,your story your rules.
nooooooooooooo whyyyyyyyyyyy i should have said to never give up