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Bright Light


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Twenty Years after Twilight was winged, she is the ruler of her own kingdom, a small island that mysteriously appeared off of Vanhoover named Equus, but something Twilight discovers on the island is more powerful than anything that has ever been recorded in Equestrian History. Celestia requests to Twilight that her and the citizens leave the island immediately. Twilight refuses her teacher's orders and the island mysteriously vanishes.
Five years later, Celestia and the remaning royal family finally find a pin-pointed location of Equus. They send Rainbow Dash, the element of loyalty, into the "invisible island" to try and convince Twilight to come back home.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

a great first chapter!:twilightsmile:

Damn......I LOVE Bioshock, huge, HUGE fan of it and so I'm excited for this story, I'm honestly hoping this is not a romance though, for I am not a fan of Twilight/Rainbow Dash. Wonder if you would allow Dash to smoke and drink in this story, Gods, this is going to be amazing but you really, really need an editor, be sure to serpate your paragraphs and when others are speaking, also I think you meant to say ponies instead of people.

I'll be watching this, Rainbow Dash having to go get the Goddess of Magic where she is no doubt being worshiped, oh yeah, you have my attention. :ajsmug: Even the Gods of Equestria can't seem to aid Dash now:facehoof: I wonder who will play Songbird, maybe a full grown version of Spike perhaps?

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Thank you!
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Thank you
and thanks for the offer, I'll keep it in mind down the line!
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2391656 My pleasure, I'm glad to hear that. You need any help, ideas or advice, I got your back:raritywink:

I think it would be much more logical if Rainbow Dash was replaced with Spike, in case you haven't noticed, i'm a big Spike fan, and any fan fic that stars him as a badass, will be liked and faved my me.

Interesting first chapter. I shall fav, and read with interest. :moustache:

Continue it please? I like it :yay:

Great start. Great choice picking Dashie for this one. She always was my favorite. Please update soon!

Shame it was cancelled, was looking forward to it

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