A heartfelt letter to thank her old man, miles away from Ponyville.
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Pretty awesome. 5/5
2733237 I agree with this 100%.
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Thanks, both of you.
She wants to be with her father so beautiful.
not gonna cry not gonna cry
Screw the though guy act 
That was amazingly well done indeed!
My feels will never be the same. Bravo 5/5
Awwww :) This makes me love my dad even more!!! Job well done! Job well done!!
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Thanks
Aww this was so cute^^
Very well done! 5 photo finish of 5
I coud see the 6 of them taking a week off to take a trip to Fillydelphia. Nice little story.
That's a good idea, I should do that. It's just I am working on a lot of other stuff atm and don't have a lot of time, but yeah I could see it happening. Thanks for the idea and, glad you liked the story.
Hi there. I hope you don't mind, but I liked this fic so much I have put together an audio version on YouTube.
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Thank you very much. I do not mind in the slightest, came home from a long day of work and found this, and it has brightened my night. You have a very nice voice by the way, just wanted to add. Thanks again.
Sweet Celestia, this is so good!
I give you 15/10 hearts! 
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haha, thanks.
3045877 You're always welcome!
Amazingly well done!
Awwwwwwww.
20% more adorable!
Incredible writing bud!
really heartwarming yet left me feeling oddly empty, this is so awesome! 
*slow, non-sarcastic clap*
Very bittersweet. She stayed true to her friends, but at the cost of being with her father.
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Thanks.
the story was so beautiful
I rank this 5 out of 5 spike mustaches
Love this story! Brought a tear to thy eye.
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Thanks, sorry for the tears though...
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No it's okay. I enjoy stories like these that bring the feels!
listened to scribbler's reading and loved this. felt bad for dash that she wanted to be with her dad, but also couldn't bring herself to.
I listened to Scribbler read this, and it was an amazing story.
+One like, follow and favorite(favourite for USA people).
Once again, amazing job. 10/10.
-stormtwi9
SPOILER ALERT! SPOILER ALERT! SPOILER ALERT!
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Comments as I read to give you a peek inside the mind of a reader.
I know it is way too small for me now, But, everytime I see it, it reminds me of you.
-Give it to Scootaloo at some appropriate moment?
I remember that night you took me out was special, even though it was neither my birthday nor yours.
-Dying, getting divorced*, or prom night and she hasn't got a date? Almost certainly dying since the first few lines imply that he is dead.
*I hope not... this is Equestria... to me they don't DO that hardly ever, they make sure they have got it right before they get married in the first place, and they realize that you don't build a marriage on an Emotion, but rather on a Decision.
But, I know how busy you are in Fillydelphia with your job,
-Ugh, never mind, I'm a derp...
This would change everything, go against everything she stood for, her life would be changed forever, something she didn’t know she could go through.
-Scootadoption?
It was for her father, the most important stallion in her life.
-Perhaps not...
The mare ripped open one the drawers of the desk, causing a thud as it slid out of its casing. It was empty, only full of dust collected over time. With a light whack, the stack of papers hit the bottom, causing the dirt particles to fly out. As quickly as it was opened, the pegasus threw the cubby back in, ramming it back into where it came from.
-Final Wonderbolt's application? It could take her away from her friends.
Atop the front paper in bold font stood the words ‘Fillydelphia Weather Patrol Application’.
-Ah... I thought she said she wasn't going to do that?
This is so precious...
But wait, she accepted or not the job on the Fillydelphia weather Patrol?