Something falls from the sky. Twilight and the other element bearers go forth to find out what it is. This will be a discovery that will open the eyes of Twilight and her friends and alert her to the danger that approaches.
Something falls from the sky. Twilight and the other element bearers go forth to find out what it is. This will be a discovery that will open the eyes of Twilight and her friends and alert her to the danger that approaches.
This...sounds... interesting.
Track and a 4.5 star my good man. At least for now...
Some minor punctuation errors but overall, I like.
224728 Thank you very much, your story is a favourite of mine.
I would like feed back :/
But meh. Ponies.