"Why is everything different now? What's happened to me? What do I do now?" If you were in my situation what would you do if you turned into a pastel coloured pony?
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Wow,intense
Again another good chapter written. I, again like how the character's are developing and how this story is coming along. I simply can't wait to, once again read more from you, and see what happens next and in the future.
-Frost
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The explaination of Mark and Trevor's relationship was only meant to emphise his relationship with his stepfather Kevin, it was also meant to show that Mark very well understands what Sunshine felt to be treated by her parents like she was unwanted.
I'm still looking into the explaination of the bond between Sunshine and Mark, but all I can come up with is who horses form herds. it is instinctive on some level, but you have to bear in mind the human mind and emotions are compicating things further. I'll keep looking but that's the best I can come up with giving what I've already looked up.
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I'm glad your enjoying the story so far, I'm still new to writing things like this but I'm doing my best.
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It's not that, I'm guess I'm trying to improve the story as much as I can with the critism I'm getting. Considering what I like I'm always miss something important. I wouldn't have noticed the issue between Mark and Sunshine being a little rushed unless someone like your self told me.
Love the story keep up the great work .
I wanted the other guy to turn into a mare too, oh well.