"Why is everything different now? What's happened to me? What do I do now?" If you were in my situation what would you do if you turned into a pastel coloured pony?
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First of all it's Mark not Matt who gender was changed. Give the memory issues some time to develop it will be explained as the arc goes on if you have any advice on how to explain this problem then I'm all ears. The closest thing to explain whats going on would be this:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/False_memory_syndrome
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I'll probably look into extending previous chapters as I go back through them to correct the grammar, god knows I desperately need to. Like I said earlier if you have any ideas to extend each chapter I'm all ears.
This paragraph really bugs me, since their relationship at this point is completely heterosexual, but I suppose that since it's from Shane's perspective it's only showing his own prejudices.
Oh wow. L&T Inspired a story? Great! I will read soon.
Oh, and glad that you liked L&T And I apologize for late, late progress. Broken hand gets in the way, but i'm back and working on the next chapter!
I am really enjoying this. althou the memory altering is... scary and crazy, It fits rather well if we learn why it's happening.
3401281>>3401281 so far I only have a few theories as to what is causing the memories to alter.
1. an entity is rewriting their minds. Celestia, Discord, Luna (since the rift is near the moon), Pinkie Pie.
2. they are being influenced by the herding behavior somehow which is altering their minds
3. somehow Scott's massive throwback and mind wipe caused a psionic ripple which is altering all ponies nearby to have altered memories to accommodate him since they all wanted him punished and would distrust him no matter what.
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Since your going into possible theories of why this is happening (that and the fact I feel like being a tease at the moment), so here's a little hint of what's really going on regarding the transformations:
There's more influencing the transformation than just the mindset and personality, take what you know of the characters and see if you can figure out what their deepest wish is.
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Scott: ........ wishes he had better parents to raise him?
mark: wishes to be a female and a mother?
the nurse whos name escapes me at the moment: wishes to be a mother?
the earth pony stallion: has a crush on mark but was to afraid to approach him
pegasus stallion friend: is mark's closest friend and secretly wanted to be with him romantically?
I had liked how this started...I had liked the emotion, the reactions, the feeling I received whilst reading of a real, tangible event...Now...I can't see why, but I'm no longer interested. I'm sorry, but I'm unfaving your story.
R.I.P. Date of Death:12/1/2013 10:55 P.M.
You have my deepest condolences.
Hmmm....I like the story, but the whole memory overwriting thing really needed more hints and build-up. Mark/Marcia's memories feel especially strange perhaps because of how different his past was. It kind of feels like the Mark/Marcia we've known until has been replaced.
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This is 30 weeks later, but when you're working on introducing something as massive as this, you have to ease into it, rather than simply throw it out there. For example, leading into this ixed-up memory arc, you should have had slipups showing as far back as 4 - 6 chapters leading into this. Small things, mind you, such as Mark sometimes thinking as Marcia, or referring to himself as such, then not being aware of it. Maybe a stray thought she has about Shane or Sunshine, stuff like that. I would hazard a guess and say that this memory change-up was something you thought up maybe a chapter or two before you began it, and it shows.
The rule is basically the larger the impact something is going to have, the longer it typically takes to build up to it. How you have it here is pretty shoddy.
I just realized that this is slowly turning into a romeo and juliet story, but it's with to guys. well Mark was a guy, but since shane who is a guy, kissed mark. Does this make them gay? this hurts my brain so much, but it feels so good, it's like my mind is going through a painful orgasm lol
3474603 Discord.. it's Discord, isn't it?
I think the creepiest thing about this memory overwriting thing is that it's foals doing it.
What I mean is that Scott got foalified, lost almost all his memories, and then called Antonia and Samuel "mommy" and "daddy." Antonia's memories then promptly rewrote themselves without her awareness, to edit in Scott as her biological son. Not so for Samuel, but he's not a pony yet. The same happened to Marcia, and Sunshine caused it. I don't know if it's some power that foals have, or if the minds of adult ponies just alter themselves based on what they hear foals say, or if someone is masterminding this all who's obsessed with biological parents of foals named RefugeInSilence. If another foal of Sunshine's age starts calling Marcia mommy, is Marcia going to lose even more of her old self in order to remember giving birth to twins? Are her memories of Sunshine going to be destroyed, replaced by memories with this new foal added in there?