"Why is everything different now? What's happened to me? What do I do now?" If you were in my situation what would you do if you turned into a pastel coloured pony?
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This story has gotten weird and I'm not sure if its in a good or bad way
I think the time displaced memory guy is kinda needless with the way things are going...... and a few chapters around him felt needless..... nut I want to see where this goes so I will wait for the ending.
Wow, a fate worse than death. Still sad that sunshine won't be able to fly :<. At least she will have a loving family even if the memories were fabricated. But then again since everything becomes reality from the memories. Not really fake at all xD
Fucking awesome dude i love your work!
sooo...final to Overwrite?...i'm a little more than confused, is there going to be a sequel or something?, just wonderin'.
anyways good chapter
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no it's just then end of this story arc. There is going to be sequel, but I'm not saying anything more than that.
I'll tell you this. That guy... scares me.
4812907 not that scary. of course i'm a stoic. if i die i die.who cares? and if i never existed why does it matter?
Why do I imagine The Memory Sentiment to look like this guy?
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Damn Fire Emblem is a good series
I don't like this decision. It was great when just the memories changed. It makes more sense to Cillen's powers. If you keep changing things in your story to close off all ways that the characters could possibly do something, your story starts looking less like an exploration, and more like a railroad. Point blank, I wanted Marcia to freak out over the contradictory evidence, have a touchingly emotional scene with Sunshine, get fucked silly by Shane, and in doing so come to realize that the past doesn't matter, so much as the people she has now. I wanted to see her get over the fear of false memories, and now you can't write about that, because you changed reality so that her memories aren't false.
It's not a huge deal though. I just don't like it, and it's fine if you just want to let me not like it.