Read "Gem Girls" first! Harem shipping between Spike, and the Cutie Mark Crusaders. (NOTE: Takes place before Alicorn Twilight!)
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2 questions. 1) Is Gem girls rated mature? 2) Can you post a link?
>>theultimatebrony 1) It's rated T for Teen, just like this Fanfic. 2) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7538900/1/Gem-Girls
I hope you all like the new image If you don't, feel free to tell me!
Image is much better than the original one. It fits with the story.
>>StealthBG_2280 Thanks so much, man! I wasn't sure at first but you helped me out.
2709628 Thanks so much, man! also,can you help me out and tell me why I replied and it said your name was 2709628? I'm new so I don't know.
2709688 I have no idea
. I am kinda new to this as well.
2709725 Oh,I just realized that after, if you refresh the page, it says the person's actual pen name.wierd, huh? ARGH! This complicated replying system gets me every time!
2709741
it's fine.
Why do I get the feeling that the CMC are thinking of pet names for their boyfriend?
2709881 Why do you say that?
Hello,all. I just wanted to ask if you think that making huge, long paragraphs in each chapter is a bad idea. Please tell me what you think.
yes it is and you have to make them longer
Trouble in paradise in this relationship.
2712499 Well, Since I update every day, I intentionally make the chapters around 500 words each time.
And I will try to improve the spacing, Thank You. 
i need A link to gem girls i can't find it
2719335 Sure
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7538900/1/Gem-Girls
You done goofed, Spike.
The herd must persevere!!!
2719335 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7538900/1/Gem-Girls
2728367
What's persevere?
2732988 "persevere" means to not give up. It's basic English, no offence.
2733018
None taken
Simple,funny(though the reactions are a bit over the top at times) Not great,not horrible so somewhere in the middle. Are you the original writer of Gem Girls ?
2733854 No, I am sadly not.
I just really liked the story and decided to continue one of the alternate ending writen by the original author. 
2736244 I see..Still I applaud your attempt to continue the story. It was a bit open-ended for me. Also,here's a tip:Read the dialogues out loud when you're done writing them. It might sound good in your head but when you read them,results may vary.
And a personal advice,ease down on the reactions. I thought Sweetie Belle became Rarity for a second
Like that
2737655 Thanks, i'll try that.
I'm sorry if anyone thinks the chapters are short,
I just write that way. 
Also, I think you will find that this chapter will be the shortest, I promise.
I don't mean to be rude but, I kinda thought that was funny when Spike went "NOOOOOOOO" like that.
Note to self: don't enter a relationship with anyone till When it's the right time.
2757234 I totally agree. you would like my newer story, The Adventures Of The CMC.
2732988 withstand hardship, not give up you get the idea
2757234 Yeah, I guess that was kinda funny, huh?
The chapter is short but it's a good way to practice your writing. You can go over the chapter relatively quickly to look for any errors and areas that might need improving or adjusting. Never bite off more than you can chew. Consider this a stepping stone to become a better writer
2784721 Thanks! You're already one of many who've complemented me in that way. I'm doing my best, so I hope no one minds if my stories still aren't top-notch.
The CMC should have responded his answer.
2792421 I know. I just wrote it that way to make it climatic.
I changed the Cover, I hope you all like it!
2832281 I like it.
2836171 Thanks!
These's chapters are pretty long
2846547 Thanks, though they aren't because most stories have chapters around 1,500 words.
Hope no one minds how I changed it from "Spike's Mares" to "Harem Of Spike"
wasn't the best of fics, but was definitely not the worst, with a little work it could have been a good fic. i would work on your vocabulary, it seemed kind of strung together. but all in all good effort
where do i find Gem Girls story